This is a novel about a general becoming a spirit that acts like a devil, known as the Krieger. She is a person with the alignment of lawful evil. Be warned that morals would sometimes be broken in this story. Also, don't expect her to act well. As in the beginning, She would rather be violent. As said before, human morals will not always be applied in this story. I will not sugarcoat my MC, and the readers can judge for themselves if she is truly evil or not. I am also not that good at English, so grammar and spelling mistakes might often appear.Please comment on my mistakes so I can fix them. Your help will greatly be appreciated.Thanks for reading my story, and enjoy. [Hope you like it, and please leave a review.]
Aye! The premise is interesting hehe! :DI enjoyed reading a story about a sword that was trying to reach a higher level hehe!Writing-wise, it's nice, grammar and punctuation are great :DI also loved the world-building hehe! It was pretty detailed, and I could see that the author had put a lot of thought into itttGreat job, author! <3
All in all, if you haven't read this yet, you're really missing out on the work of a professional author with tremendous talent and potential.
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though it's new, i can see the potential of how this story goes. the genre of eastern fantasy really captivated me into reading it more. highly recommended. kudos to the author!
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Loved the story just read it all in one go love the work. We need more chapters and world background needs to be developed and needs some work otherwise it's a good read
Read up to around 600 or 800 (near the end) partthe begin is great, classic system video game, little bit of kingdom building and industrialization. Game elements are quite consistant throughout. Around chapter 500 or 700 the novel shifts away from the supporting characters and turns more into the whole save the world, wuxia style novel. Stopped reading there, overall an above average webnovel and was quite good however not at the level of a hidden gem like the world of deities (my gods that webnovel gets good at chap. 235).
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