To say the novel is good tho i agree that OC's should be utilized as it is quite confusing how Jose Rizal is still a cannon event, the butterfly effect should take into effect as what the other review has said, overall it is a joy to read writing is good and the chapters are long and wouldn't end in a cliffhanger the world building is excellent especially historical flows was explained well enough to grasp in previous chapters.
The world-building in The Fallen Book of Deva's is nothing short of immersive and captivating. From the intricate hierarchy of elemental powers to the mysterious depths of Shadowveil Forest, every detail feels thoughtfully crafted. The author takes the time to flesh out the unique environments and realms, creating a rich backdrop that enhances the story’s depth.What stands out most is the seamless integration of the world’s lore into the plot. The blending of martial arts traditions with elemental cultivation feels fresh and exciting, offering both a sense of familiarity and originality. The elemental attributes of fire, water, earth, and beyond are more than just powers—they are part of the characters’ identities and influence the world around them.Locations like Fortress Academy and the enigmatic Shadowveil Forest don’t feel like mere settings; they breathe with life, danger, and mystery. The different tiers of monsters and the looming threat of the sealed entity within the forest add a constant layer of suspense. It’s clear the author has put a lot of thought into how the world works, and it shows in how naturally it all unfolds within the narrative.Overall, the world-building in The Fallen Book of Deva's offers a perfect balance of complexity and accessibility, making the story a pleasure to dive into.
very good story??. You have a real talent. Don't stop writing. I want more chapters?.
I’m currently at Ch 145 and he is still a cripple. He also hasn’t had any improvement in his magic circuits for over 100 chapters. It’s getting kinda old reading about cripple boy barely winning every single one of his fights. I’m quite close to dropping this novel. I will continue reading and update how long it goes with the MC being a cripple.
The MC has great depth and has a good head on his shoulders and the world building is top notch. Normally for game type novels when the MCs are in the real world the story drags but this isn't like that. The real world moments are just as good as the in game moments. I just wish the author had more time to write more because it is that good. There are also some minor grammatical errors but if you look past that then you are in for a treat.
The first chapter is fantastic but after his rebirth(reincarnation whatever it is) is kinda lacking you know, in the start before he got the God's blessings I thought he's kinda prideful, arrogant, but nah he just got beaten and kinda acting like a child like bro you're not a child(maybe you are) but u have your past life memory act like it, maybe if your memory is fragments I would understand but not it's kinda disappointing
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try writing a better summary as the current one is too vague and uninteresting ..
Jade smiled over at him before listening to the conversation again.
As the days rolled by keepers would visit and interact with the children who fit their profession. Some lucky enough to be taken young and trained personally. Adopted and taught by a master. There were some who weren't looked at until their teens and adulthood.
Now Derek notice his first challenger of the day