Totally love Lily and LQ! Need more of their fluffy love story and BF- loving and adoring action! Need more sweetnesss!!! Author mass release please
The writing quality is fantastic and so descriptive! So far, the world-building has been really thorough. Can't wait to see more! Keep it up!
It’s a great story.
YES and yes. I like this a lot. Zad is the goat and uhh... [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler]
Well, let me make a brief comment on what I think of this novel.The beginning is quite average, the MC is quite annoying, the dialogues between characters seem a bit strange and the presented world is typical for this kind of story.However, over time and in subsequent chapters, many of these elements are clearly improving. We have some development of the MC, the relations between him and one of the main female characters are presented in a good way and they develop all the time. As these are the most important elements in the novel for me, I am glad that the author pays attention to them. Additionally, a big plus from me for the MC for his taste in women. The main accusation I can have about the history is the fact that MC is really too OP. I prefer when the power of the main character is more balanced and side characters are able to compete with him.Generally I may be wrong but it seems to me that this is the beginning of the author's adventure with writing and you can see it. Nevertheless, I highly recommend following the story because I think it can only get better with time.
Story is very cliche but a cliche I love, it's a little different with the whole choosing aspect at the start. I also feel like you updated too much too quickly, space it out with one or two a day so you don't get worn out or dry up the story, good work though
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