Ah, the title got me! When I saw the genre horror and thriller, I knew I had to read more. Nice work, even from just a few chapters, I can tell it's a great work in progress. I really like it, can't wait to read more!
This is the first chapter but really it's make me want to know what is going onI think it's a great one_I am waiting for the next episode
Even though it is a new book your work is great so far, i can totally see your efforts and your book has a lot of potential, it just needs a little editing and everything would be prefect, the characters are lovable especially the Mc. keep up the good work and good luck.
Good writing quality, but there are a few grammar mistakes, the story is good I like it, just hope he won't get arrogant and wonder what happens if he gets his draconic bloodline too. I like the character so far, just hope he will be more vampire less human in the future, 6 chapters a weeks is good.
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I haven't read horror in a while, this was a nice return to it!First off, I really like the interactions between Oliver and Noah, they're both enjoyable and pretty realistic characters. The description of the horror stalking Noah gave me a vivid, creepy image in my head--which means the author succeeded!I like where this is going and definitely will be waiting to see what comes next.
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*More* beast taming? -_-
This story is just cliche. That's all that really needs to be said, but I'll go on...Cliche list:MC treated like trash,anything you want and more system,max talent MC,MC has no intelligence (despite what is claimed),MC complains all the time despite not having to work as hard as any other person for his power (was complaining about working for months yet others have worked their entire lives),auction scene (not as cliche as others as he was selling but very cliche),alchemy (anything MC makes with his alchemy is better than what anyone else made and he obviously progresses as much in two months as others do in years),fiance (I don't even need to explain this one),family problems (one of the big families but is the declining one that has been teamed up on by the others).I could go on but you get the point. Not necessarily a bad novel but just one that essentially seems like a list of cliche rather than an original story.
not good english,but i can see you have tried to writing a story,try more hard.i belive you can do better next time.the story need more patients to read.
Good story. i am lovin' it. i am waiting next chapters of Nick's magic stories with his family. I am falling in love with Jess. be patient woman.