What’s the novel?
I skipped the entire stock market thing because It bored me that I feel asleep while reading it.
did the author die or something? 4 months and nothing yet
I've just realized author only knows 1 profanity that he mostly used in every chapters
Would have been great if the author was someone else. The story has potential but is horribly rushed by the author. The grammar is awful and confusing. Half the time you don’t know who’s talking because there are no clues. The mc himself seems really dumb and useless. The whole story is trash and although I get what the author is trying to do it’s poorly executed.
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What a nice novel you've got. I have read it and I can only say that you've planned it well. The vocabulary of words was verily shown to the readers. The fact that he became a female was really gender-bending on my part. ? Like one of the most favourite anime I have watched. Do you know the slime? hehe. Anyways, you are currently a good author and how much more if you improved! That was something I look forward to. ?
Read 30 chapter And no mention Of fusion. ????????Total waste of time and expectations. Don’t Put wrong information to attract readers.
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Ok, I'm back after reading a few chapters; I really like the story, the writing is good, the grammar is good, the pacing is fine. It's not usually the story I'd go for, but I'm enjoying it.
This novel is ok as at chapter 103, the world background was ok,the story is good. But...There is alot of problems with the writing quality, alot of errors with the writing plus the story lacks detail in a lot of ways either with the quests, classes, equipments and even the story plots. For instance how long did the tutorial last. MC made a comment to the new initiates dying of thirst in the early chapters but we never saw this happen. The quest for water was a total flop, the group went out once and that was it no further updates. Though I assume it was a failure but after that was another plot and then the end.In shot Author needs to develop story better - more details.