i am giving 5 stars because i love genshin and your story is great i hope this story wont drop cause i really like it
This is a total cool OP story. i actually hate most OP stories but here the MC...let's just say I don't mind it. Anyways, the world building is very unique and the best thing in this story. It's a lot like Overlord type of setting but without the game like vibe. Just real life
It has great characters on in it and the protagonist is kind of op has a great story even though it has little bit of action in the bed is still quite great I just hope the story give us more details of it for research of course but still amazing book it just need more updates
Dafuq...what happened to Lin Fan?? Why can’t he live past chapter 60??? Lin Fan wants to show off more....pls help Lin Fan show off more!!!!
this could be the next big thing. but u kinda fu*ked up everything. anyway, a fresh concept.***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
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Expedited turn of events to the point that we are not given time to sympathize with the MC when he does stupid sh*t. Rather than feeling that his actions were justified, it feels like explanations were glossed over and his actions become crude and immoral. I have no clue if it's the translation or it's created by design, but so far I'm not invested or impressed. Verdict: Pass.
Well, you need to improve the settings and such describe with 5 senses avoid to direct storytelling put feelings make the MC react :D also keep writing it improves the more you go so I await the further publishment