I will start with what I dislike about the novel.1st - the switch between view points - I think instead of using 1st on supporting characters, it should move to third, so we can have an insight on what the other person is thinking.2nd - Too info-bumps, I forgot all the locations in chapter 3, and I think it first the volume zero category. 3rd - Clara is forgotten. What I like.The first kiss is well done.The pacing is good at my level, although slow on most parts.The update stability shows that the author is passionate about his book, and the possibility of him not dropping it is high.????
Only 1 thing dont't fit: the world construction, i mean we don't know if this world have magic or something releated! But it's a very good novel
Which begin from curiosity. An adventure that will change the world.
When she was a kid, due to her high intelligence and capabilities her parents had sent her to a military training camp. Then, she had always wished to have a mother's love, care, and protection.
The figure entered the tavern and a deafening silence followed. Every single person in the tavern knew who this figure was, in Fiore it was better to know this person, rather than be an ignorant and end up dead. They quickly went back to their previous activities, not wanting to anger the figure.
"You're right dad, you wanted to protect me," I pause, "but instead you've hurt me more than you can imagine," I bring the gun up to my head, "I never asked you to protect me, I didn't ask for you to hurt my friend, and I certainly didn't ask you to love me. Do you know what dad? I should have listened to mum more often," I look at him tears pour down my face and I know I have a look of menace in my eyes, "I never loved you"
So much to do, so much to see
Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?
It's a cool place and they say it gets colder
And all that glitters is gold
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid
Only shooting stars break the mold