Story is good as i read so far but I don't like the mc suffer more than his brothers, so I want in ongoing chapter that he at least pays back what his brothers did by broking their limbs one by one and also move the story fast, because story progress is very slow
The flow of this book is amazing. When I saw there wa two prologues, I was iffy, but they read amazingly and were so interesting.The main character is very well-written and intriguing. And the author does an amazing and realistic job of writing his emotions and actions. I do not usually read this genre, but this book gripped me and pulled me along. Great job author!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️?????
Change the freaking upbeat man shit,it's trash trash I say after 7 chapters in I'm pissed with mr upbeat man since this piece of shit author doesn't want to change the upbeat man to his true name,I mean his parents or whoever took care of hm didn't name him "upbeat man".If you just can't spell the name then change the POV so you can use "I" instead of upbeat man ,and I dare you to remove my review,no wonder you don't have more than 3.8 stars.Trash book.
The novel was amazing ?, but it had some areas that needed improvement ?, such as the main character's behavior ? and the story development ?, which was slow ⏱️, considering it's been 95 chapters ? and the original main character is still alive ?, and the tournament arc hasn't started yet ?, including the battle between the main character and the original main character ?.
Good NovelMust readI like to story And character
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okay this may seem like a review bomb but this thing is oddly suspicious. the guy who wrote two smuts is suddenly writing something about pizzas and dragons, tell me this isn't a suspension?
I have ready many of Elyon's stories and I always enjoy reading them all. I have read quite a few chapters of this story and I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!
Great story so far, it's not perfect but there's so much potential.Good job ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓ 5?
it is very repetitive and your mail mother f***** man character is an idiotic and arrogant b**** and he can't even think properly before taking an action any fee is his development phase even than he should be calm not doing some kind of idioting things that he has done in this chapter he does whatever comes to his mind he is an idiot not a logical and strategic thinker he is just a Brooke with the little bit of luck till now because I don't know what is going to happen is next chapters or upcoming chapters can become a good person or strategic thinker with some kind of fatal mistakes because of his f****** idiotic sheets that he is doing and if he does not change then the story is doomed to be stopped in the middle because I have seen many stories like that
leaving this here for the event give this book a shot I'm sure the author would appreciate it.
My main problems with this novel are the sentence structure/grammar and the occasionally clunky dialogue. However, the rest of the story is definitely on fire; multi-cultural Gods and Goddesses, a funny main character, and no idea where things will go next. I look forward to the wild ride ahead of Rey!