Wait so can someone tell me why is it that inday 80 in the novel there's no fight with the brave hero oh it's not even mentioned but in the manga he gets to fight a brave hero can someone explain this?
the author keeps reminding you of previously stated informations every 25 words that reading it is so draining, its like watching naruto but pokemon version filled to the brim with “past events” making the story itself barely progressed anymore. aside from that its pretty decent. the translation was great.though i recommend reading“start with contracting sprites” intead, it has the same starter “pokemon” but not as repeatative as this one.
The novel's setting is highly engaging, blending survival challenges in a post-apocalyptic backdrop with a harem system, adding layers of complexity and intrigue to the story. The protagonist, while facing various enemies and dilemmas, not only demonstrates formidable combat skills but also reveals his inner tenderness and sense of responsibility through intimate interactions with different female characters. Each female character has a distinct personality and background story; they are not only the protagonist's partners and lovers but also independent and strong individuals, greatly enriching the overall narrative.[img=recommend]
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As far as I'm concerned, this is the third story that I have read that allows the mc to pick attributes from things and get stronger. One being the "Complete Martial Arts Attributes". The other being "Picking Up Attributes From Today". Basing this story off of these two, while sad to say it is a slight let down. CMAA is funny witty and very cringy. PUAFT isn't as cringy as the first but has a sorta of novel feel to it. This story while starting out on a different note lacks that quality.On the plus side, its a story about attributes and I always welcome them. Have a good day/night.
Good novel author! The novel starts off good despite the first two heavy chapters and as I read more, I found it interesting. He has a lovely family to 'take care' him.
The stories progressing alright as far as I've seen, and I'm excited to see where it goes but I feel like there should be more character development. The novel also seems a bit fast paced without any time for me to fully immerse myself into the scene. Other than that it's ok for it being your first published work.
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Writting grammar is good. Easy to readStory starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily.The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out.Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively.World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all.Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average.Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.
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I haven't read it yet and I'm only giving a review to ask the author what the tags are... hi author I hope you can answer my question... I'm only giving a review this long due to the word lower limit
I am really interested in reading more of this story, to have an established protaganist is a change from the recent sign up system stories that are currently in vogue right now.