Definitely a villain mc alright , dont really have any complaints , a very nice story you might wanna start increasing your production rate or else
I haven't read the novel yet. Is there romance?.................................................................................. ?..................................................................................
An exciting novel that takes you to a world full of magic and secrets. The characters are deep and internal conflicts make it interesting. The narrative style is fast and makes you excited for more with each chapter. Only, sometimes some chapters are a little complicated or full of details that may be distracting. But the story is still fun, and I look forward to following it!
yo is this a harem one?? anyway imma give it a try
Although undeserving I’ll be shameless and rate this 5 stars. All stories are unedited first drafts so don’t expect too much from this. I thought I would share these as they are my loved creations and the beginning of my writing journey. I don’t ask that you like this nor do I want praise all I ask is that you respect my efforts if you decide to read this.
Good job! Really enjoyed reading every bit of it. The write-up has a good flow and the plot is interesting. Waiting for more! Keep up the good work!!
Keeping me on the edge of my seat, not bad ?
Morning now baby very busy very close call zones
The description of the characters and narrative style are peak. Grammar is perfect. Perfect use of punctuations and storyline has me in a chokehold. Alexei x Oliver?❤️
the overall structure is thrilling and the beginning is captivating
I loved the previous novel from the author and I'm liking this one even more.
The 3rd person is very prominent and makes this extremely difficult to read. Basically every line starts with the characters name and then proceeds to explain what that character does or says. It is almost similar to reading a script. The grammar is also just generally not great, though that can be improved. My main critisizism is the way the story is told to you instead of you experiencing. It's like this character did this and said that and felt that way. The writing should express that, but leave some room for interpretation instead of being so closed. Hope my ramblings make some sense, this is intended to be constrcutive not cruel.