HelCatNY9
is this books dropped? i dont see a chapter for very long time.
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I got to chapter 39 before I had to drop this, writing quality isn't poor but it is close. To give an inference, the first person perspective is so bland it sounds like 3rd person. Fights are short and most parts skipped until tables are turned. Characters aren't fleshed out, story is forced, there is little detail about the world, and to world is also meh.
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
Now that I think about it I don't even remember my name. The woman didn't call me by anything so I don't really know.
He walks beside her she stops and pointed at him and herself again.
-im Alex the girl Who helped you! -
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
My world's on fire, how about yours?
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
"Maybe I can heal them back" suggested Saya to the panicked Gremoria.
Only shooting stars break the mold
