I mean... revised?
Where the update ??
Nice story heart wrenching. However author have not been updating it for a long time.
Ch.17 - Yeah... Nah, good luck to anyone else reading this. Wish you guys the best!
This is a trash novel. Wth is wrong with the author's brain?! romanticizing rape?! The author of this novel must be a pervert
It's abandoned again? :(
shameless author giving shameless reviews.
it is good. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's a good story but while reading at beginning it is similar to The Authors Pov novel
The MC is not edge lord and thank god it is not a system novel. Book is good. Atleast Give it a try before passing judgement. My first issue is pacing. The pacing is too fast paced and stabilized somewhere around 50 chapters. Hope author continues it that way otherwise it feels like watching a YouTube video on 4x speed. Second issue is main characters are training day in and day out. There is not enough break. From readers POV it would too overwhelming as they are productive every chapter posted. To offside it, show how MC and similar are interacting like going outside doing something entertaining etc. it kinda takes readers mind off but the transition should be organic. MC is becoming too OP too fast. Even without system cheats MC is becoming OP too fast. Better make the MC settle for sometime and make readers adjusted. Naruto is a story which takes more chapters to fully explore. So it is best if author takes it slow and explores more. Author specific:- If you are serious about writing this fic, Try to look in reddit sub threads for novels with high intense fight narration. It might help writing more flushed out fight scenes. Fight scenes are the bread and butter of Naruto fic. The story premise would be same for all the thousands of fics but if you want your fic to stand out you need to bring in more to the table. Overall it is 4 out of 5. Let me know about the criticism author if you have read the review.
OKAY, it seems my journey ended here. Thank you for the story. I guess I don't have a choice but to accept it since I don't like your decision. It was very enjoyable to read. Thank u?.
Happy to read this novel from start to finish... Happy memories always linger forever in my thoughts. For every character that was introduce in this novel. Thank you for rhe one who made this novel, I can't mention your name as of this time but Iam truly thankful of you for sharing your wonderful talent in writing. GOD bless.