Hey author i know you treasure this book. But read my review before deleted this comment.First. Everything is rushed. How did 'lucky know thay the mc had a limiter:? It wasn't even mentioned anywhere. And Lucy has killing intent from nowhere. Care to explain not here but in the story.Sceond you are' trying' to get the element of mystery or surprise but you unable to do it.Third the mc has an 'AI' that can look in to the character's weakness. Don't you think that you have added and AI and then the heir of death. A bit to much... The story os great however the turns of events as well the quality is top notch. However, here is an advice. If the first 10 chapters are great then the readers will care to get the money out of their pockets. So please. Make the story much for understand able. What you are doing is writing your thoughts and ideas that you want or thought in your story that you want it to be there immediately. YOU KNOW THEBPLOT AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. BUT WE DON'T. Ask a person to read your story without knowing the plot and you will understand how a reader like me suffers from trying to imagine how mc has AI in his head. Give some details about.
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I really enjoy this work, nothing seems rushed not overbearably slow just the right tempo. And the MCs attitude I can relate to. Especially with the new character added.
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I don't think that your this funny. Hahaa.. I feel the vibe of someone from you bro...And you Tales if Existence was also good.I advice a little improvement from the grammars.. then it would be a perfect masterpiece!
What i love most is the writers quality of writing and its style, I have binge read this book and i woke up to 10 chapters updated every 24hrs, I want to commend that and say that as much as I love this book, the author has proven to be an ink.
The situation the MC was in at the beginning was really painted for me, and I was able to picture it happen as I read it. His interaction with the mysterious events, consistently seeking for answers, that don't get answered right away helps push the MC in the right direction. I really enjoyed the relationship between the orb and the MC, and hope this back and forth continues throughout the book. It is also nice to see a cultivation novel set in a science fiction story line, as it doesn't always work, but the author was able to make it work, and work well. Added to my library, can't wait to read more.
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