Hey guys, had to get to WebNovel on my break just to say that I’ll be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com
Hope you support me
Good writing and funny characters. I love the how Mars ruins Nathan's fun each time. Eager for upcoming chapters. You have a new fan in the making.[img=recommend]
hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/KOMI
please oh please don't drop this. I don't think I have red anything this week read that is free in a long time. I would even pay for it
I don’t know if this was intentional but synopsis is very misleading.If you are expecting a story where the mc owns a card store and his power is to use the cards he made to affect reality, you are dearly mistaken.Apparently, the shop isn’t even his. In order to gain new cards, cards that HE made, he needs purchase them from the shop owner. It also seems like other people can enter and purchase these cards considering how accessible the shop is. The mc’s power of card actualization doesn’t even feel like his own power. It seems like something the keeper granted to him seeing as he has to not only go to the shop but stay in it to open cards and actualize them.To be honest I’m just disappointed on what I expected not being what I actually got. I’m not the only one who feels this way, so I think a good idea for the author is to change synopsis to make it clearer on what to expect from the story.
Another good one to read added to my favorites. Thank you.
This! people! this is the Story about the System that you should definitely give a try! This story has a Fantastic Premise and unlike what the name suggests this is not the typical story about fantasy with System like power system. this is an actual Scifi story about Technology and how it can be used to do productive things and benefit Humanity.
Though I love this story I can't help but see some typos and mistakes here and there along with a Strange choice of words that could be easily fixed. overall this story is easy to understand if you don't various appropriately placed scientific words.
Since that mistake can be easily fixed and doesn't cause a major interruption to the story combine with my own limited knowledge of Grammar I think this one still deserves the five star on writing.
give it a try and you will see how Great this story is.
Look for the other post i already made. I have two accounts so yea. thought id do a review on my other just to get that drippy 5 star. Im planning on writing more and i am currently, its just slow since im still thinking of minor plot points and how i want characters to act n stuff. expect a cool MC in a bit.
⚠️Spoilers⚠️:Two chapters in and there is already a massive plot hole. See, Merlin was one of the strongest figures in their world's history and his class was also the same as the MC's; an SSS-Class - Reader. But somehow, the very same teacher who used to brag about Merlin's achievements didn't recognize the MC's class even when Merlin's autobiography was available at the library. There is also the problem of the slightly less powerful, ice cold, and focused heroine. The side characters are two dimensional and didn't have proper development and they were used as items to drive the plot. In terms of the grammar, I didn't notice any big error but it was still a bit of a struggle to not focus on the minor errors.
This makes me happy. finally a invincible fam fic
A really great story and realistic i can't stop reading this book its really good Looking forward for the next chapter__________________________________________
everything is confusing especially the game world it is straight up trash .