"This is a very nice one. The horror elements are on point in my opinion. I read it at night alone and I didn't dare go to the bathroom for another hour or two before I couldn't hold it in.""It gets me shiveri-" (????? ???????? ??????)". . .wait what was that? " (???????)"Ah, I'm just hearing things. Scared me fo-" (????? ?????)". . . Who's there!? "(????? ????? ?????)'?? ?? ?? ??, ??'? ??????! ??'? ??????!???? 911 ???? 911 . . . ?? ?? ?? ? ???? ?? ?????? ?? ????????? ???'"HELP ME! HELP ME! PLEASE-SOMEONE"(????? ????? ?????? ????? ??????)'???? ?? ???? ??, ???? ?? ??? ????, ?????? ??????' - "??? ??????? ????? ??? ?? ????????? ??? ?? ? ????????? ??????? ?????. ?????? ??? ????? ?????""I'm dead, I'm dead, I can't contact anyone"(????)"Wait . . .the thumping is gone, I'm saf-" '?? ??'. . .???????
Hi GUys, thanks for the reviews, I got the rates, at last, yeay!!!hahaha, sorry for my writing quality, originally I write in Bahasa and I translate it (its faster this way), so sometimes I missed to check it and the words become unbelievable so bad, hahaha, I will fix it, it would be better by the time, i promise ^^
sometimes it's hard to identify who is talking to. the story is good but you post me by killing the maid. I personally don't like tragedy driven plot, it makes me feel depressed when a character I like die.
Pretty good novel, but it gradually gets more complicated and messy, then it gets even more messy as it tries to resolve some of the mess/plot holes/complaints. The author definitely puts a lot of thought and effort into the novel and looks at comments and feedback, but tries to do too much and eventually got lost in all of the stuff they were trying to juggle at once. Maybe I'm being too quick to drop it, but I skimmed some chapters to try and get past this filler/mess to get back to the good story, but it never did. Dropped on ch 279
This is written By Overlord Venus. That alone is enough to prove that this novel is of high tier quality. But even so, I'll give my review so you will have better understanding of the novel with no spoilers.Writing Quality: As I said before, its high tier. The author described the scenes of the novel vividly to increase the immersion while keeping it not too much to prevent info dump.Story Development: From what I have read, it's one of the best post apocalypse novel out there with huge potential of becoming a top novel. The novel revolves around mc regressing back to the past with the help of a leader of a Post Apocalypse Dispatch Society.Character Design: The Author didn't let me down on this. All of the characters felt real. As if you are interacting with a real person. Their actions doesn't feel one dimensional.Updating Stability: Although there are only two chapters at the time I gave this review, the author updates frequently from his other novels so he will likely do the same to this novel.World Background: Not much is known from what I read except for it being in the same universe and timeline as the author's other novel titled I Hate Systems.Overall: A must read, a masterpiece! The author has lots of writing experience so this novel would be one of his best! I suggest you read and give it a try!
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it takes a werido turn with the MC development because it makes home seem real real dumb. I couldn't even finish is before I got tired of his bs
A unique and nice novel, the grammar is good, couldn't find any mistakes. The story is developing in a satisfactory phase, which is not too slow or not too fast, keeping readers like me engaged. The sci-fi plot is amazing, I liked the mc, and the other side characters introduced till now. I will be rooting for the novel!