I look at Dylan.
Like opening a drawer, the contents in that 'piece' of the wall was revealed.
"Sensei!" Naruto looked shocked. Then he looked behind him and saw everyone still running. "Wait. Kai!"
The plot is..... okay I guess? Honestly that's the best way I can describe it. Chapters are short and most of it is filled with nonsense and peanut gallery filler so that nothing ever really happens. The MC has 5 wives early, and every single one of them has input on every sentence the MC says or does. So a chapter usually just reads as:MC: let's do thisWife 1: yeah let's do itWife 2: sure anything you wantWife 3: I always wanted to do thatWife 4: I can't waitWife 5: I'll grab the snacksAnd that repeats in the chapter for literally every sentence or action. Run into an antagonist? Not only do the wives all talk, so do the bad guys, and so does everyone who sees it. I had to drop it because 10 chapters worth of content was spread to 100 chapters due to all the filler.
the story was good at first but it looked lost direction
it a good book for trial reading good story
If you enjoy a interesting novel with a MC that reminds of you the anime, Baki. A interesting society and world-building, give it a try!There are a few things that needs to improve, however the whole premisse and the idea behind it has a lot of potential to be a great novel. I hope the author continues!
It is very interesting but it is too short continue.
Why haven't I encountered this novel before? this is gem and a five star review from your one and only Awesp—ShinGotLost!!!
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It starts out a little slow but it picks up pretty fast and it is pretty interesting to read once you start reading it but when you do you do not want to put it down.
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