Amazing, the author is a genius at making mana realistic as well as showing how history as effected its advancement. The types of powers in the book are also incredibly diverse. From genetic based to skill based, you never know if the opponent has a overpowered ability or can juice a basic spell with a million times the maximum or even creating things that break away from the science of magic and deletes into creativity like black flame or shadow flames, how shadows can infect darkness. That's just he world building lol.
IF YOU LIKE HAREM AND MAN OF THE SEA!! this is a must, its a very very very fun read, DU DU DUN DUN DU DUN DU DUN DUN DU DUND DUND DUND DUNDUND DUN DUN DUN*Don't bother me, i'm singing jack's theme*
Catchy synopsis. Adding this to library.Can't wait to see more of Alexander.I recommend this book to those of you out there that love adventure.
buku ini sangat menarik karena alurnya yang plottwist dan ceritanya yang membangkitkan selera membaca, sangat tidak sabar untuk bisa melanjutkan membaca novel ini
Name: 魔眼术士Author: 系统他哥AKA: Magic Eye Warlock on some placesI've read about 120 chapters and it's a mix of kind of interesting and not for me. Most of it is in the other world so far with only a bit back on Earth. The other world gets more and more detailed as it goes on.
[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021][Reading status: 7th Chapter] •••[Strong points:]- The first hook is in the synopsis 'eunuch mage' which leaves a whole room for imagination. - The pace in initial 7 chapters is kind of slow but believe me you'll be soon immersed within the descriptive style of the author.- A reasonable amount of explanation is sprinkled throughout the chapters, with an utter emphasis on the development of the MC. - The author did an immensely enjoyable part in turning the cliches upside down, the parents are supportive, siblings of the MC are teasing yet the bonding is there. However one brother sounds suspicious nonetheless. The master of the MC is determined to guide him too, hence you won't experience the typical chinese cultivation novel storyline. - The narration is highly readable, with less-to-none mistakes (although I didn't spot any in 7 chapters) which makes the reading experience smooth.- Everything flows within a vivid picture that the reader can imagine the whole scenario and surroundings effortlessly, I didn't face any trouble imagining and playing the descriptive combat with the beasts. - However there's no hook in chapter 1 and 2 but the gradual process of MCs daily life and the preparation for the test is also interesting. - Chapter 6 and 7 unlocks the spice of excitement when we see the MC getting his skills and awakening his aura and other abilities. - And tbh I've never seen such combination of the skills and powers (or perhaps haven't read yet on WN) and thus this work was a good one to read.- The verbal abuse and insult by the audience which MC received also shows us his desperation and hints back the reasons why he wants to leave the palace. - Then next comes the system, which is 'passed down' to the MC by his father. Which itself was kinda weird thing to read, but in a good way. Since I wasn't expecting the system to arrive in that particular aspect. [Weakness:]- The descriptions of the characters regarding their hair, eyes, figure etc was kinda unnecessary. As a reader I skipped them and I believe most would also skip those paragraphs since we can't really register so many characters by crafting their physical forms in head.- The title of the story of extremely bland which is a big deal I'd say, and since now I've read up to 7 chapters I'd conclude that it requires a change immediately. Title shoulde be catchy enough equally as synopsis or why would readers even bother to click on the book. Since synopsis appears after the cover and title. [Note for future readers:]Please give it a go upto 7 chapters at least before concluding anything about the book. Thank you~
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The book is overall a very good piece of work and is getting a good response in the growth in the views, the overall rating is also good. What a nice novel!
Author's Review!Well, what happens when you get bored with the same old MC sitting in lotus position and cultivating his life away?Dual cultivation and the fact that only MC could cheat using this without any common sense or logic? Bored with Alchemymaster/Forgemasters/Swordmasters/Formationmasters etc etc etc MC's?Here I present to you a unique way of cultivation, Kama Sutra. Kora Le Blank(MC), a being with a transcendental mentality, couldn't leave behind his sensual desires even though he knew nirvana could only be achieved via letting go of all mortal desires, treads on the demonic path where virtue and sin are non-existent, using rituals as a method to grasp what he so desires--Nirvana.
this novel is Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat!
Good Writing Quality and Updating stability BUT the Author doesn't know how to pace, it took like 200 chapters to get to level 2 limiter and then the MC suddenly flew past level 3, 4 and 5. The author doesn't know how to make a stable academy story line and the factions are all hostile to the MC which is kind of ridiculous. Instead of creating a good story of interweaving plots, the author puts a lot of useless filler chapters and even intentionally putting the whole character status again and again in a chapter to increase word count. Overall, the author has potential but you need more reading, just think quite a bit for a good intellectual plot rather than creating trivial fillers. My words might sound harsh but trust me from a veteran reader and writer ?
The story has a good head start with the hero being a mafia boss and the first chapter shows promise that this has the potential to be a good read.