i like this story....... but please increase chapter frequency....... atleast 3-4 chapters per week ..... ... ......... ... .................
This is great, a bit late on update but still great... Love the story line???_ makes me wonder how the webtoon adaptation is going to be. I really want to support u. Hope this words of encouragement is enough, keep up the good work. Just know u have a fan in me XOXO, Sire_gram.?
Nice story, i like the plot and the environment, i hope it gets to get pick up so i can enjoy it. It reminds me one other the (Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God)
I'm giving my novel 5 stars.A lecherous system and a perverted protagonist in a cultivation world with all kinds of beautiful women for the picking.Does this novel not deserve 5 stars?
Wow, this novel is good. Though some wording choices I could do without, but the story itself is amazing. First POV written and you can immerse yourself as you read. The MC is an interesting character and the events that are heading to a great place!Author! You are doing so well! Keep it up!
Honestly I love the story line as it brings something fresh to these types of novels. The characters are entertaining with how they react to each other and reading it only leaves me wanting more. If you like a military style mix of magic and tech this is a good read.
Not gonna lie, seeing the score i had high expectations, but sadly i got disappointed. I don't want to be too hard on the author, i know that it's very difficult for him writing in another language, but this novel needs an honest review.Writing quality(2/5): overall the writing quality is barely passable, it's not so bad that it's unreadable, but it's like reading a middle schooler essay... Lots of grammatical errors (missing puntuaction; swapping pronouns) and strange syntax order.Stability(5/5): nothing to say hereStory development(3/5): not really a unique plot, but overall okCharacter design(2/5): the MC is described as cunning and scheming but in reality he is not that smart. He do really stupid things that attract unwanted attention on himself even if he keep saying that he don't want to be noticed (like when he random kills 700 people in the ammission test getting the attention of all the powerful families, or when he reveals his name when supposed to be dead, and many more...)World background(2/5): the background until now is non existent.
Hi,This is Nelly, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on LGBT Fictions. After reading your "Gay Alpha Meets Mate