Outshine the Monsters

I will follow u to death...just don't drop pleaseone of the best system novels I have ever read...I recommend this to everyone but those with weak hearts...there is an ntr tag for a reason.

i like this story....... but please increase chapter frequency....... atleast 3-4 chapters per week ..... ... ......... ... .................

I think everyone has been spoiled with novels like King's Avatar and RSSG to the point that everyone is expecting most of the game genre novels to be written in that style. This is the only novel I've read so far that actually reminds me of my early MMO gaming days. The newness, the unknown, the willingness to share without caring if someone was gonna backstab you or not. Everyone would share and create a guild in order to achieve something higher like end game content. All of this is expressed through a noob player like the MC and it's okay. It's not cringe, and not full of jaded emotions and hate. And I'm kinda here for it. Granted I'm only at Chapter 13 but so far so good.

(1 2 3 3 3)/5=2.4I've been spoiled by some of the recent VR game novels. New Eden, the dragonmancer, have genuinely spoiled me.this novel is actually alright. the writing is not on part with i think it was virtual sword god. particularly the editing.however the plot is fairly good and intriguing enough.still, I'm quite disappointed with the occasional grammatical error. the sudden mc arrogance and the inconsistency.otherwise, this is alright

Translation quality   4/5 Nothings Perfect in this worldStability of Updates 4/5 Nothing can remain stable in life let alone MankindStory Development  1/5 CH.1 MC at Lv 35 No info B4 That at AllCharacter Design     1/5 I Know Almost Nothing About Him at Ch 15World Background  1/5  Again No info B4 Lv 35 besides him being in the woods. Also Ch 15 so far NO actual info on stats/class choices/skill info etc at all author just says what mc has and not what its Cd is mana cost nothing this is more like a wuxia/xinxia then a VRMMORPG then anything i have not even seen the mc stats sheet in 15 chapters mc killed a elite boss solo and didnt even gain 1 lvl author leaves out almost all Vrmmorpg game info so far at ch 15

   This story uses so much detail in describing the world within it. The author seems to be a pro at building plot points and proper bases for building up the story.       When I read this book, I can see the world vividly as if I’m really there. The earlier chapters give us a bit of knowledge as to the main character’s life, letting us sympathize with him.        It describes the quests and the app itself in relatable terms, making it easy to understand it. The leveling system and functions work like a person gaining social status in the Mid-Evil Renaissance.     There’s so much potential here! You’re bound to love this book! I guaranteeufffc!