"I couldn't sleep. So, I went ahead and explored the surrounding territory since our map got ruined. I found a road nearby and decided to head back here. As I was on my way, I spotted an animal feasting on a berry bush, and shot it." he explained.
"Oh, then allow me to formally introduced myself. My name is Ashley Avery. It is a pleasure to meet you."
Star Killer Base - Prison area
"And what do you want me to do exactly?" He asked. Adam's frown quirked.
He reached for his pocket and tapped on the screen. His phone was unlocked, to his surprise, it was a text from Mia. His hands almost faltered from surprise, his phone almost slipped. It was a simple text and yet…
Just read the first chapter. Top introduction. Gonna post a new review for y'all when I get the time to read (sigh).....................................
OK THIS IS A FUN SMUT NOVEL YOU GUYS NEED TO READ,.THE MC MORGANA IS A DEVIL OF ZEX..THIS IS A FUN D GIRLS NOVEL YOU GUYS NEED TO READ..THIS NOVEL HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR A BLOW STORY.
I have been reading this for quite some time now and I can say that this novel has everything you want from this type of novel I love every characters ,power system, world buliding, comedy if you have time you can give this novel try you won't regret it .I garentee that and for author thankyou for entertaining us
This is a pretty good book I would recommend reading
Story has a lot of potential and as a fan I will urge you to update frequently. I really want to know what he’ll do with the Ultimate military system.
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWickFeel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishereOr on Twitter: @tirtatare
It's Good... That's it.Nah, I'm just joking... The world building here is amazing, yup, really! especially when the author adds up engineering on his fantasy world. But I found something that turns me down :< The *** jokes are being abused here too much, and I know the author even said that he wanted this novel to be comedic, but it isn't essentially needed to be *** jokes right? it's okay to touch it on and I gotta admit that at first, It was amusing and hilarious but, as time goes by it became toxic to the story to the point that I skip chapters. (Not only that, I am a bit skeptical of the author. Well, you see, he clearly shows his fetishes on as* l*cking, and those big racks of his characters in the story, some *** jokes is a bit too much. In short, I don't want to offend the author but his writing shows his sexual desires, making me think that the author is a single who has not experienced real relationships... Please, author, don't get offended >.<) And that's not only the reason why I skip chapters. Some chapters are not that necessary to the story honestly, an example of this is the longest school entrance arc that I had ever read, yes the point of this is to add more and expand plot lines but man. Well, the start gets me hyped because of the uniqueness of the story, and I don't want review it fully because the story clearly isn't in the climax yet. But I do hope that the author improves the things that I've pointed out. it'll make the story enjoyable to read.There are many potentials in this story, I'm a writer too not here but on Royal Road... I am the same as the author who wants to improve English (well I want to improve my English grammar) and share our fantasy to inspire others. There are still good and fun or positive things about this novel, and there's a lot! my stars wouldn't be 4 if it isn't that great, right? But, fellow author, keeeeeep up the good work! and continue to inspire others!