Perfect idea but was not edited properly like the quality terms for talent always changed and other stuff like that
I don't think I've given another book 5 stars yet, but this gets it. The story is a gritty and very real depiction of what it's like to be at the bottom with a desire to escape.The first arc hit hard. Like really hard. It's obviously a made up story, but the emotions in it feel raw and visceral.I wouldn't change anything about this novel. There's no need to change the writing at all, because perfection is not necessary here. If anything, any writing issues just give the novel more character.Truly a fantastic novel, and I will be following it from now on. Well done to the author.
Amazing start! I want more! I wish there were more novels just like yours.. nvm, I'll just wait for more chapt :DDDDDDDI am expecting some cool/badass summons ( like a tank/truck, or an airplane)
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this novel is the best mc is evil and i love it iam sick of hero plots
I've enjoyed the story so far. despite having a system the mc doesn't feel just stupidly op from the get go. I think the ability skills would be better if he had to create his own after the initial ones given by the ability books or purchase but that's just my view. overall a great start to an adventure
This novel is bland. I don't like any of the characters personalities present at all. The way people are reacting and communicating is disappointing as well. I was intrigued at the start of the novel since it's somewhat similar to Overlord. Once they reached the tavern that's when I started disliking the story. You could have done some world building, develop their personalities,or push us to in the direction that this is a real world and not some game. From what I seen is a novel that makes no sense. The emotions and the reactions of the MC feel forced and cringy. Once they started the dungeon the story just turned to hell due to the revive function and vampires. Sorry but If your just going to make the MC some powerhouse with slaves and have a revive function then story is not going to go far unless you want to make a average novel that's filled with readers that praise your novel for having an OP character with a harem. If you want to improve as an author you need to compare the emotions and world building of your work with great novels that are similar to the genre of yours.
Hi Author here, of course I'm gonna give my novel a straight 5 LOL. I will release 1 chapter a day with at least 700 words. But I'm bad at naming so please don't hate me.
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Its like another story of upgrade specialist in another world with a worst plot and writing style. it looks it got its idea in that novel so this novel is no no for me.
Overall, this novel is wonderful. For those of you who aren’t going to read this novel because of the yaoi or netorare tags, you should know that those tags are irrelevant to the story and don’t actually happen. There is no NTR and this isn’t a yaoi.
This story is quite interesting... Simply catch my attention just look at the synopsis ???? but here i want to ask, when will you update the story.. I miss the mc and male lead????????????