Demiurge_Ohara
Different type of story but its good.Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
I had this very thought out and amazing review.... and then I accidentally deleted it. Sigh* Well the key points were that this novel surprised me with how good it is and how it doesn’t do the things that annoy me in other novels like unrealistic face slapping and harems. And finally it was that I am excited and wish to see this novel continue further in the future. And doggy gif here because I think it’s cute.✌️
dude I will give you power stones if you would just update it daily....plzzzzz I love Hollywood novels very much...plzz don't drop it and update it.....if you want I can give you ideas as well.........
I was sad when I found out that the orig was put aside, but whrn I found out about this, I was friggin ecstatic. I was one of the ones that voted for this over on the discord server and it gives me a really satisfied feeling when my opinion matters. I'm really excited to see how The Big Succ goes this time around and I can't wait for it to come!
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the author was not lying when he said it would be slow paced, I'm 27 chapters deep and i can't build up any motivation to continue reading. Nothing stellar or exciting or even different so far to catch my attention and keep me reading. The writing is very well done and the characters have have depth, if I had to complain about anything is the fight scenes are lacking
Shynobi here... I'll be shameless to give myself a vote. This is another concept novel that I will update 1 chapter a day. If many likes it and it reaches enough reader traction, I will take out the draft I have for it and continue writing. Thanks to all those who take their time to read my novels... Love you guys!
It was really good and I couldn't stop reading I encourage you to write more and keep on writing. good job! I can't stop reading. I love your work and your chapters are the best.
Hope this get translated.The pre-quel is the best novel i've ever read.In previous book, I love all about how to build the MC. How slow pace the MC is build. So I realy want to see how the development character for Han Li in this book.
I'm already captivated with the plot like Whoa-I love itttt! You're writing style is detailed and I can imagine each scene in my head which helps understand the plot. ????
This is such an interesting story, honestly! Unique than the usual stories I have reviewed in WN. Just work on the dialogues a lil bit more instead of just summarizing what happen in the description. This book has so much potential. Thanks author!
