Demiurge_Ohara
The author forgot many things after reaching 400 chapters. The Stories became more and more annoying to read. The novel described mc to be smart and scheming but in reality he just an overpower idiot
looking forward to a new horror story but from the setup of this being a bus full of college students I can't imagine this being a very long story compared to other novels. Could someone tell me how long this novel is in raws?
Shameless Author review! :OOOO >:(((
I hope Y'all Are enjoying the story as it goes on, I'm A newbie writer so Any tips on how I can make the story better are appreciated!
Though I haven‘t finished reading all of the current chapters I can tell, this is gonna be a good book!
It’s a really interesting story, you have xianxia elements along with some cool technological stuff. The Mc has been shown to have a very mysterious past and cool abilities so far. Id definitely recommend giving it a read.
Its really good I suggest you read it, the story is getting more interesting and the characters are also well explained
I love this book. It's giving me ancient vibes. I love that it's so descriptive and vivid. keep it up!!! I would love to see more updates as soon as possible pleeeeaaase!?
It's a really good storie with many twists and epic Moment's.I hope you make more of it and continue.
Something about the MC is sort of scary. Just the vengeful-like nature of this story is pretty thrilling and suspenseful. I'm not sure if I'm supposed to feel the way I feel about this book, but I like it.
I Like This Novel, Its Very Intresting, Hopping For Faster Update ?I Also Read These Novel Rebirth of the Thief who Roamed the World (Great Story ??❤️)Tales of Demons and Gods (Unfinished Author Left)The Legendary Mechanic (Great Story ??❤️)MMORPG Rebirth of the Legendary Guardian(?)MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It BreaksMaster of the End TimesThis Earth Is A Bit FearsomeThe Great ThiefReincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (3000+ Ch, Great Story Until ??Rushed Ending)Advent of the ArchmageEnd of the Magic Era (Rushed Ending)Night Ranger (Rushed Ending)One Man ArmyMMORPG: Rebirth of The Strongest Guild Master (Ongoing)Rise of the White Dragon (Ongoing)
Love the book so far. The Author is a really talented writer who makes me feel as if I'm the MC in this book. Anyways, I like the MC so far, and the people he's surrounded by, excluding Lucas, cos, as of right now, he's a tad bit annoying but who doesn't love good banter.Also, in addition to the MC being with Elena, I see him being with Anna, and probably Cindy....the dynamic between Anna and Cindy will be funny.
