Evil woman you made cry!!
I like Amber ? This story is worth of my time. I realized I lack in narration while reading this. The plot is nicely written. By the way I hate that blue-eyed man ?
Is this ever going to be updated and completed.
Indeed, one does not require a high IQ to comprehend the text, but I still feel compelled to address some issues with the novel despite its lack of logic. Here are my concerns:
1. The storytelling is disorganized, causing confusion. For instance, the protagonist's fear of her husband, who was her spouse for three years without any reported incidents, lacks a reasonable explanation or development.
2. The significance of the transmigration and reunion with the main character (ML) is downplayed. It leaves readers wondering why she's so frightened after living with him for three years, and the intensity of her fear feels unjustified.
3. The background of ML's previous marriages is weak and poorly handled. Having two wives who died on their wedding nights seems implausible and unexplained. The author should have delved deeper into this aspect of the story.
4. There's a sense of amateurism in the narrative structure and event management. The handling of the two deceased wives feels forced, used merely to create suspense without providing a coherent explanation. A more focused plot, where the protagonist uncovers the true nature of her husband's first wives, would have been much more compelling (ignoring the unnecessary subplot about his ghostly pregnancy).
In conclusion, the novel could have been captivating if the author had stuck to a coherent storyline and avoided unnecessary elements that detract from the central theme.
She does get a partner but we rarely see them together. Romance is not a focus and no worries about harem or reverse harem sh*t, I hate those kinds as well ??
It's gonna sound very weird saying this but, I like that the *nc*st is not the authors wish fulfilment and it ties into the culture and inner workings of the worlds, if that makes sense
Thank you I'm going in
Already at chapter 81 or so the male lead doesn't have a much story
bro didnt make it ?
Yeah I still don't understand why he stopped writing
So I read this and Apotheosis of a Demon, and I absolutely loved both of them. Are there any suggestions for a female protagonist lead novel and she gets OP?
End. Ok I see, lightnovelpub. com keeps on allowing for his crap. I remember the authors and make sure to never read their novels nor support them in the future. We waste days and nights of our time reading and supporting the site to at the end have endings like this that are not endings