Spirit_Immortal48
I'll admit, this is a very different type of web novel that asks you to focus much less on the plot and more on the characters. Doing that, for me, creates a much stronger ability to enjoy the series. There's already a foundation established for what we can expect for the end of the series and a very rough idea of how that's going to happen. How well this story turns out depends on the characters, which I do like so far.I look forward to reading more chapters from the author. It's a very kick back and read it type of series that doesn't ask too, too much from you.The dish description could more detail, admittedly however. If that can be fixed, I'll enjoy this series a lot more than I currently do.
All in all very good. Doesn’t entirely focus on *** and even includes the POVs of some other characters besides the MC. Can’t wait for more.
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this noble is super awesome,, I was always searching for this kind of novel. so far so good hope you continue this writing style.,?? definitely deserves 5 star.. ( personal request : author could you please do a mass release)
This novel has a lot of potential. It's interesting and unique. Though the writing style is something I'm not use to. And it's not good to dump information in one go. But nevertheless this is an interesting read.
Thank you all for the honest reviews, I really appreciate it.
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Hi, this is Mr Voltaire (translator of this novel). I also translated Shura's Wrath (all the way back in the day) and The Lord's Empire (more recently on Webnovel). This novel has a relatively slow start, but it definitely gets much more interesting as it progresses--the MC is the type to use his brains to get strong, playing his cards well in each of his simulations to become stronger. What I think is also pretty cool is that the simulations then make him OP in real life as well. Hope you enjoy this novel!
Gimmicky piece of trash. It is already bad enough every urban story has a LoL segment where MC impresses a girl.... Now its the entire story. Absolute trash. Dont even bother reading.
Writing quality - This is a 2. It's clear the author just wrote whatever nonsense that popped into his mind without reviewing it or editing. The grammar mistakes and poor sentencing structures quickly pile up leaving what has been written ineligible and hard to make sense of.Stability of updates - This is a 1. This may be unfair but I can't be bothered to check chapter dates. However, this novel has been in my library for a while now and there's barely more chaps than what was initially available. I feel that under no circumstances would update stability reach 3 or higher.Story development - This is a 2. The story as of C11 isn't anything special. The mc came from an orphanage then went to some sort military training thing.Character design - This is a 1. Most characters are background mobs with no explanation to their looks and end up being described as a collective group. The few times we do get distinctive explanations it's basically just something like: that guys's a dwarf. Not only that but we've only seen the personality types of 3 people and they've very basic.The mc is supposed to be cold and rational. He sees everyone as someone he might need to kill. However, he acts like a dumbass and is fine with staying weak even whilst considering how he might have to kill the strongest person in his group. He gets followed around by someone trying to act buddy buddy with him he initially thinks about how he wants to kill him but then out of the blue starts conversing with him as if he has accepted him as a friend.The 2nd character (can't remember name) is basically just described as a righteous goody 2 shoesThe 3rd character (can't remember name) basically just attaches himself to the mc and we're not given any reason why.World background - This is a 1. The background of the novel is very limited and from what I vaguely remember is kinda generic.
