I loved reading this, so refreshing and full of memorable characters, best of luck . I want to go deeper into it and best wishes for it .
This definitely got potential. In terms of plot writing, it seems to be establishing itself quite nicely and am excited about the overall world building.Hope you execute it nicely.
nice one. a bit slow. but i still recommend reading it.
[[hello there my good friends, your favorite writer, bone cat, is here]]Alright… I will write a small review about my novel, so I don’t know how that will work, and if you have any other questions please leave it in the comments.“ what’s this novel about?” Well, it is about a boy name is Verak, who had two bloodlines, and make his way throw many lands and planets fighting powerful mages and creature to be the strongest, will it seems very common to see this type of novels, but I assure its not.“ what type of a person is verak?” Firstly he would be normal kid with big dreams, but in the future he surely be another person with another beliefs.“ is there a romance?” In my plans now? No. There isn’t, because I don’t know really how to write romance things, maybe in the future.“ does the mc overpowered or any other character?” No, I will try not to make any person overpowered, but of course there’s some charatcer who will be overpowerd at some point but after it, no.Also, I will try not to make the characters very dry and like they are from a child’s story’s, I would try and make them more real with their own beliefs and dreams, that will be hard considering that’s my first novel to write, but I will do my best.
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"Come on lets take a look" JN
Soon afterwards, Sasha's father came into her room. Seeing Sasha, he shed tears. Sasha was even more startled. It was as if he had become a totally different person. What changed him? Of course...she realised soon that nothing had changed. Both her parents had always loved her. But, she never figured it out before.
The 9 Dvine Stanleess Empress Sacred Body: Comines Divine stanlees Body, Divine stanlees Soul, Nine Profound Exquisite Body, Heart of Snow Glazed Glass, Sacred Body.
"For the record, the body you're using is a male cat."
What about saitama? Hey I want saitama author sama
Scene 3:
I tried to think about Gatsby then for a moment but he was already too far away and I could only remember, without resentment, that Daisy hadn't sent a message or a flower. Dimly I heard someone murmur "Blessed are the dead that the rain falls on," and then the owl-eyed man said "Amen to that," in a brave voice.