Rapidmoviment
I really love reading the story for the author and translator vividly presented ideas and concepts that have enrich and enlighten my imagination into realities and unrealities in this world of skills and competition..... more stories like this KUDOS to author and translators
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Standard trash. The fights are more frUstrating than thrilling. The authOr tries to milk the tension When the mc has to fight someone 2 Levels higher, but instead of justifing why his his Genes isnt trash, he Ends up justifying the attituide of everyone that thinks his Genes is trash. In the author’s mind, a win is a win and the MC won is enough. But the mc won by ambush in a frustrating long fight with a nameless mook.
The system the mc has isn't what I was expecting, bringing down my expectations to rock bottom. The title might as well be changed to 'Immortal Hero: I can see the Answers.'That's basically what happens when the system is used. MC uses it, gets the success rate and should have called it a day. But wait a minute, there's more! The next system blurb states what the MC needs to do to get that percentage to 100%, reducing the MC to your average MC depending mostly on the whims of the system, and not using their own skills and intelligence.
It’s a great action story that’s moves at a good pace. It has and interesting story concepts with great characters to follow. It’s very descriptive and proves terrific imagery.
Great read loved it thank you keep going think you have a great story and plenty possibilities to explore like the Harem vibe that you are creating would be nice to see some that our MC opens his eyes onto all the subtle clues that they drop
