The melancholic vibe of this story is its major highlight for me. I like how the past is initially shrouded in mystery and slowly revealed, then the misunderstandings?? man that's enough to drive me crazy
This story started out well enough with good potential but slowly went downhill. Especially the later chapters around 170 or so, it feels like the author has given up and just writing for the sake of it. Many wrong choices were made and I observed that the author will ignore fans and viewers opinion. I feel that the main reason behind the downfall of this story is that the author wants to focus and succeed the work he's earning money from. That's not a bad thing. Sure this is a free fanfic. But you had loyal readers for this story as well. And it feels disappointing that a good author will ignore that and then continue experimenting on what he thinks is an inferior story. I don't mean to be so harsh in this review but I was one of the many fans who had high hopes for this story. Unless this gets an edit, this is it. I thank you for your updates and wish you all the luck!
Esta es una novela muy buena, la recomiendo.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Honestly a pretty superior book, in both concept and writing quality. It goes extremely in depth in world background with the Evo-facts at the end of each chapter. If I could say anything bad about this, it would be that the characters and their naming sense is kinda cringe, but other than that this is pretty god tier. I am around 50 chapters in.
nice book i recommend you to read it's amazing story
So far, well written and captures your attention. Autor does a good job describing the scenes.
Ohhhhh good l....what a fantastic book..
This is a biased review. Grand Void Daoist was the first author whose novels I truly enjoyed and was willing to pay for thus I am giving 5 stars just cause.
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pretty good, slow, but gave alot of characters They play a role in the progress of the story, and they are not brain dead
Yan Zhangjian memandang gitar dengan mata menyipit sebelum menghela nafas: "Aku tidak benar-benar tahu instrumen apa pemuda Vaun ini, bisakah kamu jelaskan instrumen apa ini?"