My main complaint is the writing quality… sometimes it’s hard to understand what’s happening in the story… the author should find someone to edit his chapters as soon as possible… other than that it might be good… though the mc seems a little naive for someone with future knowledge.
I couldn't get over the grammar ? I'm sorry author. I also don't like the use of japanese address in the book, it feels weird when the characters aren't japanese
leonardo and ava chemistry is interesting. the way novelist present it is ?????????????????????????????????
Woah......time travel , my all time favourite. I always love a good time travel story . I would love to see how things play out for him . Can't wait for more chapters to be out . You have my support ?
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this ****. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna take a **** much. If this novel got some drive, thank God its still alive.
I liked how the author paced the story. This is the one thing that is hard to see in the many stories here in Webnovels. Things are flowing smoothly and the events shift properly. it's not all over the place unlike some of the stories I had read. The narration and dialogues used was not forced and it gave life to the characters. I look forward to seeing more of this wonderful novel. More power to the Author.
The Adult Content tag should be removed since the explicit scenes have been removed.Just basic killing and innuendos don't quite qualify as Adult Content or Disney couldn't peddle their stuff to kiddos
I found your book through another book i'm reading (the forbidden fruit), where the author referred to you - so i just had to see what that was all about, lol.I've read about 5 chapters, and i love it so far! I just wanted to let you know! Amazing job
The story is really tells about the eternal love .... eternal considering revival of amorous scenes of lovers. The story also justified the rebirth of one of the lovers while one waits.... tor his reincarnation... They meet .... that's is it.
I've had time to think about this story, and quite simply it just isn't very good. would you sacrifice almost everything else for :comedic: bits and pieces? (and I say pieces very literally here as most times that's all it is; pieces of)I see all the reviews about; "don't take it seriously or you won't have fun!" but when the actual story itself brings the reader out of that mindless popcorn fest with its own disregard for even a basic standard of bookkeeping it goes a little beyond the pale.see, I have no issue 'turning off my brain' if that's the kind of novel it wants to be, but it needs to be very careful with its own internal bookkeeping, so I don't actually have to be worried about it myself. that's the state of play a story like that has to bring to the table.it has to be consistent, and, ultimately, it has to be largely funny and fun. I, personally, think the story fails to do so, and it's all the worse because of the rest of the issues that fall by the wayside as a result or because of this idea that one doesn't need to care about the rest making sense or working so long as one or two things is done serviceably.but what do I know, right? 1800+ ratings and a 4.54/5 overall at this moment, it's gotta have something to it, right? maybe you'll see something I didn't, maybe it's just not to my taste, maybe I should ask myself why I pushed so hard to like this story? I read more chapters than I would normally do...
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Well, first off, let's just acknowledge the amount of research there in this story. The rest is also good. Finally, can't go wrong with interrupting the nameless president's rally.