The Cliffhanger!Oh my god, the ending! The masked figure showing up with a gun completely flipped the atmosphere of the chapter. You’ve managed to leave me with so many questions: Who is this new player? What do they want with Skylar and the others? The last line where the masked figure singles out Jasper just adds another layer of mystery. I can’t wait to find out what happens next!
Honestly I'm more than willing to wait for the full chapters
World background is great, the past is about war is great too,the speech in the first chapter give me goosebumps like the character introduction and personality
The story is really good, and it builds up until a tension scene breaks, then chaos ensues. I like how Arthur has to go to great measures to get what he wants. He also has an interesting personality, and has a large insight to what happens next. Thanks for an awesome read, I’ll continue spending my stones on it. ;)
I too came from the first write of this novel and the re write seems detailed and interesting Looking forward to reading more....
Really great story. The excitement and challenges that a player face during all the journey makes it inspiring to read. It’s very well written. Easy to read and fun for anyone who plays or likes football or just a good story.
the genre is so refreshing and the character is distinct, I cannot wait for their further development---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Hmmm ...." Writerz looked annoying as always.
but forget it ..I have to go."
"You really are an idiot. A smart idiot."
"Aku tahu dia telah menjejak Penjahat Jalan Merah," Nicholas berkata dengan tenang. "Tetapi ini bukan tugas dia. Dia telah melangkaui batasan yang ditetapkan."
"What do you say?" Mrs.Smith asks. "Will you marry her?"