A good one.
The cultivation speed is kind of slow and realistic, the kingdom building takes a good part of the story, unexpected good battles, a reasonable mc and good girls.
Even though this genre is heavily written about, the author does a great job of framing it in a new and refreshing way. The dialogue seems real, and the world building is well done. Please keep up the good work and continue writing!
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on.The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Honestly the best sports book I have read in a while. And this comes from a person who doesn't like Webnovels of this genre that much. But the author's words seems to have a magical effect. You would feel as if you are self inserting into the characters. Each one is a human, an allegory of what we could and couldn't become, what one wishes to do in life and what one wants to achieve. In all honesty sport lovers should give this one a try, for I haven't seen any competitive web novel that stays truthful to the realism this much. Truly a great work.
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꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅.᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ.꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ.ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ.ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ.ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!