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I enjoyed the storyline of the novel so far and find it promising, but it's difficult for me to provide a thorough evaluation at this point since there are only a few chapters available. Nonetheless, I encourage the author to continue with this work as I am enjoying it so far.
I am at chapter 90 and i am dropping this. It’s because mc parents are dead, his sister is gone. I am not saying that novel is not good but for me it’s just frustrating. Many are commenting about mc being dumb but he actually becomes good with latter chapters but i also think author should not wait for giving mc powerup so late since many readers normally read 10-20 chapters max before dropping if its not good. But overall world building and system power rankings are good. Writing quality is also good. Mc becomes better with time too. Overall novel is good if u r not like me who become frustrated when mc family dies then its for u guys too. Also his one sided love rejects him so I don’t like that either since i m harem lover and I don’t think there will be much harem in the beginning because of pace its going in recent chapters. Anyway keep it up author its a good novel its just not for me or readers like me who hate sad type novels since i am here for fantasy and enjoyment and not for frustrations. Keep it up.
hello am the writer of the novel please hope you like it.
I'm having so much fun reading this novel xD the mc is a total delight, humorous and cute because of how naive he is!Even the women are just so hilarious, I love all their interactions >.
Story looked good and it was a good read but it is pay to read from chapter 4 so i wont waste my coins Reading more, i normally dont UsE coins until chapter 30 or 40 to get a good feel for the book.didnt even have tge chance fir this book.
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I think you should give more insight into the surroundings. Maybe try changing the locations it will be more appealing. But no doubt it's a strong plotline you have developed. Keep it up I am here to support you beautiful.???
At first it was interesting but as the Novel goes on it just becomes more and more stupid.Mc and all the other people was such a low IQ that it just makes me feel as if it is to forced.I hope there is a Author with the same Novel idea but takes the Novel more serious
honestly I've been searching for something like this one it's just a light hearted adventure type I wish always stays like this and let us enjoy the slow but awesome world building and storytelling it's like your really with them on their adventure it's really good and realistic of a world that they are just having fun honestly you wouldn't even care about being op mc or such thing even though he is but more like having a new life of adventure fantasy and story that doesn't need like big even happening that they have to do save the would it's more like chilling adventures that's just perfect if your looking for something like this and most importantly the details on the stuff they do . the only thing I wish is stays like this and doesn't just go with stereo typical villains like the "spoiler" here like the demons that are building up .and maybe a little more details of follow ups with they're system and leveling sometimes and some skills that get forgotten and that's the only weakness in my opinion to be honest but overall it's really a must read
story good. idea good. speech of who's talking and when songs play could be clearer. stability of updates is becoming better. i had a detailed explanation until it got deleted and i had to do this again and i cba
THE MOST UNDERRATED NOVEL ON THIS WEBSITE THE GRAMMAR AND THE FLOW IS IMPECCABLE< THE WORLD BUILDING ABSOLUTELY BEAUTFUL EVERY THING ABOUT THIS NOVEL IS SO PERFECT