This novel, not biased, have the potential to be one of the best novels on this app. I'm not even kidding, it has the potential to be at least in top 10, if not top 5. Okay, let start with what makes this good. First, the writing quality is peak. You will see little to none grammatical errors, or spelling errors, for that matter. So you don't have to bang your head in order for you to understand what the hell the writing means. The description is very good; it allows your brain to vividly imagine what's going on without you putting much effort to it.Story development? Honestly, I would argue it is one of the best aspects of this book. I won't spoil it for you but the foreshadowing is absolutely fire ?. There won't be a lot of info dumps at early chapters and the development is not fast nor slow, just perfect. There is also comedy and humour to lighten the tone so you won't get bored. Character design. The characters are almost life like and you won't see any characters acting bizarre like in your usual cultivation novel. There maybe some cringe stuff to them, but you will definitely relate to most of the characters and intimately understand them, specially the MC.The world background. To be frank, the novel is in its early stages, and if you are familiar with the author other works, then you can at least depend on him that much ?. So my advice is to read it and see for yourself.Now there are some minor issues as well. But they are nothing problematic. However, one issue I'd like to push to the author is that, will this be a harem novel or not? for me personally, I'd like to be single FMC and most of the readers, from my experience, will also like to agree as well. The reason behind it is that, it is not a smut novel is shgs, this novel is fantasy/action/romance book. But it ultimately is about beast, and I think making it a harem will beat that purpose. On the other hand though, please do continue to write some lemon scenes. I think this much will appease the harem route readers. But yeah, this is it. P.S. if you like novels about dragons, you're in for a ride (u2060◠u2060‿u2060◕u2060).P.S.(2) Author, this might be selfish of me but please increase the chapter release rate ??
The pacing could need some work, and the genre should be magic realism (urban) ?putting the themes and realist settings. Otherwise, the novel is well written, it's just needs a little humor or dark element, to me?
I... I really despise how slow it is. You don't need to tell the protagonist's story by beginning it with them waking up. That's like the biggest cliche ever. It took me a while to read through it because of how slow it develops. The pacing is a mess honestly. The plot is good and interesting if only the author had fixed the pacing. I appreciate the author for posting consistently though
nice start. The book has a nice and unique premise and the power system is one of a kind I recommend everyone to read it
This novel has a good starting point and I like the main character's personality, I just hope author-san sees this novel through as I am enjoying it already. Continue to update please.
This is the first web novel I read, and it seems good.I really liked the idea of the mc acting like an NPC and a player at the same time.I think you can talk a bit more about the mc since we don't know who he is. Though you mentioned some of his character through internal dialogue, we don't even know how he looks. That is why I had to give 4.8 to your character design.Apart from that, I am confused about something. The story has a lot of magus characters and you are saying they are a race, but which race? Are they human?
??This book is an amazing one.The author really put some real effort in writing it.I know he’ll keep us updated everyday.Really lovely. Ooo
very fun novel to read i like the world building very much
I saw this book got reposted, reason not any of my business but from experience this book is a must read! An apocalyptic tale where everything came from the sea, and to the sea it will return once more, the main character seems to be special but not in a way that cops everyone, he struggles, he learns, improves. so far its intriguing how the author flushes out world building on the open sea, without it feeling like the same backdrop, its unique and its clear research was put it where its due, good job author, may your chapters be better than the last with faster updates
It's a very good story i liked it very much????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????☺️?☺️?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
really enjoying it so far. written well and easy to understand. FL acts her age and deff gets herself into trouble, but can get herself out of it almost as easy as she gets herself into it lol. with a little more drama then others, but it's not a dark drama. it's certainly a fun read that makes you want to see what will happen next!
so goo story..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................