great book, this is the first book in reading where the MC becomes something that shares no similarity to humans and it's amazing. His relationship with his siblings is developed so well and actually matters. He's actually smart and uses his brain. The descriptions of the settings are so vivid and enrapturing, one of the best books I've read
this is the best novel i have ever read munya.Also the main character is actualy big brain in this one munya.He is also the cuttest thing ever munya.
started on this a few months ago and literally used all my fast passes and coins to catch up to 10 chapter privilege. don't regret it one bit. love the cultivation, harem, fights, and while sorta slow at the start the growth rate speeds up nicely later on. by far my fave cultivation, harem novel on WN
Great story lovely book that was neatly done
So far so good as you mentioned it'd be a fun project. But need to work on punctuation and create more conversation between characters to not feel like two dimensional. especially when colt interacted with Clara it was so fast and it'd not look good in the long run. Waiting for more..
I'd highly recommend this novel to any eastern fantasy fans, it has a good plot, is well written, and has a fleshed-out cast of characters. Can't wait for more chapters!
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It has mystery, it has thrill, it has attraction, it has hate-love romance, it has brutality and what not??!! Adding this beautifully crafted work to my library asap!! Well done Mahum!!??
to be honest, I dont really mind the grammar and im 12 chapters in. i also doubt he edited it because there are still typos. grammar isn't bad but the English is pretty elementary. now, the only thing i have a problem with is the character. see i don't actually have many problems with the mc as many authors write unlikable cringy edgy characters. I just hope that the mc will actual develop as the story progresses, and as im only 12 chapters in thats a big possibility. but while I'm here I do gotta point out how 2d these side characters are
I highly recommend you to NOT READ THIS THING. It’s about a girl traumatized, treated all her life as a kidnapped child, and brutally abused, tortured and RAPED by her husband. She’s like those women who cannot be freed from their husbands, like a child who has been kidnapped for a not short time. Without will nor HOPE. This is horrible and terrifying. Making her as a culprit showing him as a poor guy in love. Mega disgusting. And this is totally unrealistic. Romantizing CRIMES is wrong. Women out there are suffering because of guys like this one. Nothing funny about it. I really hope this story isn’t picked. HORRIBLE SHIT. I read the 40 free chapters in order to be just.
While the start seems to be similar to the gamer, it later goes its own way and becomes a truly great story with its own strengths. For those who cry about to much stats... Just don't read it. The stats are relevant and the character stats always at the end so that you can skip them. So yeah, thx author(s?) for sharing your story and I hope to read many more of your chapters.