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wait, severely overpowered transcendant female protagonist, do you all know what that means!? ?NO PUSHOVERS! MORE ??! MORE BUM KICKIN'! NO NON-CONVENTIONAL! AND MORE IDIOT LICKING FEETS!! (no I'm not an M)Come men! let's add to that number of feet lickers ! (once again, not an m) LET'S DO IT FOR THE WAIFUS!!!!!
Feeling odd, Bae Seoyeon took the phone, "Hello, Di-director Kim?"
The Protagonist is so cool!World Building is amazing..and tbh her personality is perfect (Ruthless and Merciless towards her enemies and super kind towards her own people)FOUND A GOOD FIND
Nice keep up the good work (I need to do this for the minimum word limit. because because because because because because because because because because)
some of the readers probably have brain damage cuz they spam the comments with stupid questions. like, DId’t h3 Hav3 A bRok3n l3G.when in the previous chapter that he got healed cuz of a level up
Ok, Ima be straight with you bro. This was painful to read. The dialogue is rough, although clear. I mean to say that while the grammar is good, some of what they're saying makes no sense if you think about it from the way an actual conversation works and flows. Granted, I didn't read that far, but if you think about the dialogue in the conversations you're writing and it doesn't make sense to you, it probably will not make sense to readers. I don't say this at all as hate or anything, I say this in encouragement. Believe me, your work so far is not at all as bad as others I've seen, by far. Good job so far and good luck.
Loving it, it’s a mix of actual story and erotic encounters, would love to see more of this and fast!I can see this becoming way better if you fixed small mistakes such as misspellings or typos
From wath I read this has a kinda scadderd story, but it seems to be getting a little better chapter by chapter. The main character is the only character we really know, because we haven't gotten a lot of information about the other characters or wath they are thinking. On the other hand this is a story from Tha mc's point of view so why would she know what the others are thinking. It would de good to get an actual date for updates but I think getting one or two updates a week is fine even if a date isn't set. The writer makes a few writing mistakes here and there, but it isn't that much of a problem. I'd like to know more about how smart the mc is. She has knowledge, but how much of it?
That Hurt.Actually, it is my first time reading Realistic Fiction, and seriously it strikes.I love the way the characters are explained physically and emotionally through their actions and not through a monotone para.Love your Work Buddy!May People never go through these scenarios.✔✔
Nice story love how it's goingExcellent outstanding and greatLove the FL ???????Keep up the good workAnd also more chapters ???And another thing, Please do continue!!!
NICE BOOK!! Really like this author's writing style. This is a good story, and I will follow this one. Spending 30 mins ti read this book won't let you down.