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Yeet!!! I noticed some errors in grammars but nah!!! Even Grammarly and a little proofreading will remedy those!!! Story Development and pacing is just right, I think? The pacing got rushed after the 5th Chapter though. Fast-paced is different from rushed. Don't be excited to write your thoughts, that's where almost all writers rushes their works. My past work is just like that too???. Just like what Webnovel says when you're about to write, Just keep calm and write. Don't be excited or too fired up. Character designs is good and explorative, also imaginative. I quiet envy your imagination, haha. All in all this has potential, keep up the good work!!!
It was good, interesting, and a thriller story. The author wrote the details nicely and I can't get enough of how the story turns into.Kudos writer, keep it up!.
Surprising from the beginning, the development of the characters keeps you in the story and the characteristic of the ranks of warriors and wizards makes me curious about the unimaginable power of the superior ranks, especially of the wizards, anxious for the next chapters...
My opinion based my current progress (ch 36). Story has really good potential. Characters seem interesting, the same can be said about world setting. Unfortunately there is one huge minus to this story - number of mistakes in chapters is really high. It's understandable to make them but so far it looks like chapters are not checked even oncebefore publication.
The author writing is superb overall. With the interchange of occasional humor combine with wordplay, it's a plesant read for me. World is full with potential of exploration and is contstantly inviting the reader to explore the interesting idea it had. A good read if you're looking for a ride humu.
Nice story so far (Chapter 8 and ongoing). The only thing is minor mistakes and you seriously need an AUX chapter for these characters lol.
great this story is, you will simply be engrossed in it right away, the synopsis caught my attention. Been following this authors work Black ghoul and later on I saw this n added it to my library and I don't regret it its simply awesome. author please update more I want to know what happens to the biogenetics
I have no idea how this has 4 stars. The writing quality (style, grammar) etc. is poor and the MC and all the other characters are just retarded.
I really liked the book until Jessie popped up it just seems to me he simping over
Please, please continue this story, this story is the best one of it's kind I have read in months, I just want it to go on forever, for Rika to continue all the way to being an ***** and finding her own happy life with someone she can accept and who can accept her, I love the humour of the story and I don't mind much how hard things are for her, it fills me with endearment how she keeps going.
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