i love this work and story line with full of mystery and love
Great novel, but it's starting to go downhill at academy arc because of that curse fate and making everybody look at him like a villain even though he didn't do anything. First of all the cursed fate doesn't make sense at all because Amelia is still living even though she was also fated to die the god of Fire literally said that he do anything about Death and can't save Ren even if he get chose because he's fated to die which is totally bs as another god comes and save Amelia from her death . The curse fate just seems unnecessary at this point
I actually read this when it was on kindle imagine my surprise when I see it here.It’s always nice to see a ntr story so 5 stars for that and I genuinely like the writing and characters hope to see more and don’t listen to the hate, people can like what they want (unless it’s illegal) so take my stones cause I forget to use them
This novel is a tour de force, gripping from the first sentence to the last. The author’s narrative talent is evident in the fully realized characters and intricate storyline. Each twist and surprise kept me engrossed, making it impossible to stop reading. The prose is both graceful and straightforward, painting vivid scenes that pull you into the author's universe.
author have you decided on yuri thing personally I hope there is not and also does this have ntr I hope there is not
I love this novel, The pacing, details, and characters fantastic. The complex info dump is written in a easily digestible way. The only thing is I wish characters, architecture and environment were described in more detail, that is only because I am an imaginary or visual reader if that makes sense. I highly recommend this novel!!!!!?????
I love the novel with the various characters and so on. The one thing I hate is that there is too many POV's, tend to forget minor characters unless to will be relevant to the plot. Some minor characters reappearing and that messes my flow.
the Story is for a so called Hobby writer quite good and interesting. the worldbuilding is really great and Kyran's journey from a chased after tenny-new-powers-mage to a decent Master and possible boyfriend/Partner/to be Husband is very addicting.
how to move onnnn? i so so so so so soooooo adoreee wei ying hé lan zhannnn
I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail.Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters.I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building.The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand.Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional. I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine. I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem!I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
Great story!! Please post more frequently!! :) :) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
excellent book appreciate the expérience thank.... the mc is ok .i'm in chapter 42.........…................................................