DetachedDreamer
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
The story has a rich world building and amazing characters that are well thought out and developed! The author possess a rich vocabulary and strong grammar skills, making the story an enjoyable reading experience. If you guys have a little bit of time, I strongly recommend giving this novel a try!
The story is entertaining enough. It's a good read at least and very nice. It is thrilling to read, but at the same time, it has its funny moments. It's an okay read. Though it's clear that the writer has a lot to improve on. Not on the story but on the writing, the way some chapters are written. Overall, it's an alright book. Can't wait to finally find out just who the ML is supposed to be because there are times you're left guessing if it's him or not.
The story is nice and I like that every chapter is ending with a clip hanger so it is nice! This novel is perfect for New Novel readers, I love the story just some grammatical mistakes and that's all over all this is very good Novel
This story is pure magic! The character relationships are so authentic and well-written. I’m really invested in their journeys and can’t wait to see what unfolds next.
I love all of Author's novels. hopefully this is also a masterpiece
It starts out strong. Glory to the Undead!
The main character seems to be an interesting guy from the first chapter
I love love this apocalypse novel. The bonus*The ML and FL has great chemistry
not the best but its a good read. mm its a solid 8/10. knowing more about the cards that he opened would be nice but its aight. i do reccomend giving it a try.
Has great potential, I wish the author luck in his work with God’s blessings. Review: going to be doing this in WebNovel structure so be lenient with me.Writing Quality:The writing quality is good, I have yet to notice any grammar mistakes or misplacement of words. The might be some, but it’s not something that would impact your reading flow. Update:The book updates often with the author having to take a break to deal with real life situations but who are we to judge. It could be better in my opinion but I would prefer quality over rushed work. Story development:The story itself is interesting, with an evil/rational mc who was placed in a world that’s seems to be primordial history with the usual Gods,dwarf,elves and etc but what makes this good is how the characters actually seems decently strong and realistic. Like at one point, a god notice the mc and went to kill him himself. But that’s to much spoilers so I won’t go into detail, so read it yourself and I tell you, won’t regret it. I do have to state that the MC plot cheat would be a dues ex-machine, meaning that a higher power would come in to save the day but this high power is also using the mc to develop himself. Character design: The author took inspiration from a lot of novels, some popular and well known while others not so much. I’ll be honest when I say the mc gives me the custom demon vibes with his thinking and decisions. Although, I do believe that some stuff could’ve been done better like his cautiousness, we can just chuck it up to his inner animalistic instincts. This is a non-human novel with the mc looking like the cover with every evolution (not sure if the author changed it in the future). I don’t expect any romance and I doubt the would be so don’t worry about it impacting the reading. World background: As I said before, the story seemed to be placed in a primordial historical world, with titans falling and rising to god hood, with Gods birthing their own creations. I have not read a lot of the novel with paying chapters coming in early, but from what I’ve read so far, the world seems to be big, with a lot of dimensions and domains of different God and stuff.
"The equipment is ready, Master." Jester said while looking down saluting.
