How long is this novel gonna be and is it gonna be posted in ladge batches?Translation is really good and novel is actually pretty interesting just dont know jf theirs gonna be more chapters
Bad word building a lot of things go unexplained like what is the skill tree they are talking about some time he gets random skills from it and other time he just find the best skill in random places, they don’t explain if he only has it or does everyone else have it because it seem like it is just him and the power scaling is terrible
I think the book is great. The main charakter is someone who cares about his family a lot and is someone who just doesn't die =)
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i dont exactly know how to feel, but sometimes this story actually makes me wonder what will come next, the best part seems to come after chapter 27, but I really have to go back reread the rest of the story sometimes
Good novel, compelling.Suggestion: Make sure to flesh out who teleported him back in time later on. You could introduce a bit of fantasy or magic realism/sci fi into the novel. It would help your novel be way more compelling than all the stories in where this happens for no reason. Please try to think of an overarching plot that includes this.Overall 5/5 for now. enough said, added to library.
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