The novel has good potential. The world building is good. . The character building is excellent.I hope the author continues writing the novel. .
A friend of mine recommended me this and I thought it was going to be some boring story but guess what?! I was left speechless and eager for more chapters over chapters.
I was enjoying this story—a little. EE…It seems like IF one entered a sect to cultivate, that a cheat that made cultivation irrelevant would take away all the satisfaction—most of the satisfaction—out of attaining higher realms. Still. the tongue-in-cheek way the author handled the story made it halfway amusing. Then the act that ruins so many of these cultivation stories occurred. The protagonist ordered the little girl under his tutelage, to cripple someone's cultivation. I have no problem with murder—even torture, under the right motivation—But in a cultivation world, as described, absolutely NOTHING would justify crippling someone. There is an old proverb: "How do you hurt someone who has lost everything? Answer: Give him back something dear to him—BROKEN." IF one had been a cultivator, normal life would be hopelessly broken. Every second of every day would be like walking with shards of glass in one's shoes. You know, JUST ONCE I'd like to read about someone promptly committing Seppuku upon having their cultivation crippled. Ah well, I rant.
A good novel is one where the opening line catches your eye and pulls you in for an adventure. In my opinion, coming from my experience of reading hundreds of books, novels are detailed enough to allow the mindscape to picture the described world with ease and have a cacophony of interesting twists and turns make successful novels. At this point in writing the review, I've just finished chapter 266: Runecrafting. The novel is well developed in terms of world description, character design, details in describing items, and overall well written. There are some minor writing flaws, but nothing is perfect. All in all, Great work so far, Author! I'm thoroughly enjoying this work.
My most favorite Er Gen novel in existence--and yes, i've read ISSTH, RI, AWE, AWWP but honestly, for me, nothing could compare to this work. I absolutely loved Su Ming as a character and how he grew throughout the series. I also loved most of the cast, and I think that Er Gen did the main villains justice, despite my searing hatred for what they've done. I enjoyed every book--though I felt that the berserkers vs immortals part in book 3 was kind of dragged out, but I also think that books 5-6 are what really hit me the most. Recalling it now, my heart hurts again.
This is one of those novels that has a great premise and really interesting idea, but is poorly executed. The creating unique monsters is really interesting, and i enjoyed seeing the different combination. unfortunately the rest of the story is lacking.
1. this book is murdering the english language2. interesting characters at first, but no development3. we are just dropped into a world, there's no information4. the story is not badconclusion: it is readable and zan be a good book, if you have free time and nothing to read, but to absolutely say that you have to read this book I wouldn't go that far.
the story is really interesting and something fresh its not like the usual thing and the progress is smooth too there are many intereresting parts and it will probably contain multiple worlds
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Why did they start translating realms as "planes"?............................................................................................................................
I honestly love the book it well written and the effort made by the author Is noticeablePlot development -excellentWorld building-excellentCharacter development-good