Okay. love this book. It is very well written in terms of grammatical correctness. But as expected of all novels the characters are paper thin.Despite that, it's a good concept if not a novel one. Its written very well. Updates everyday and always end with a cliffy, leaving you wanting *MOAR*. But recent arcs have been dragging a bit. Hope it picks up pace like the earlier arc. But otherwise it's a very good novel and currently my most favorite on Webnovel. Every night (india) I await a chapter to read before I can go to sleep.If I can make a request. Please do a Mass Release once a week. Even If you dont update a few days. Also a Suggestion- Since the MC has started writing novels. And has already published HP. Think about writing other Popular novels like Worm and A Song Of Ice and Fire. You can yourself create Cinematic universe with the above mentioned properties where HP travels to Worm or GOT at certain points. image the fanflicsAnyways thank you for writing!
Author here giving his own review for this book. I would say that the writer(me) is doing a wonderful job.Of course he can do better and I bet with support from you readers he can do much more.
I love noir, the twin dynamic is beauty, I also love the exposition, but can you add a bit more details to the characters so we can better visualize them, like their outfit and looks
This is a review for an FO. I like your story cover
The grammar I great and the characters are developed at a good pace. Although it is fast paced in some areas, its quite good on an overall score. I recommend it for anyone who loves action based novels, it's surely a must read
I love this story it a nice change for bleach from the point of view. from Hueco Mundo and protagonists from bleach novels if Sōsuke Aizen is from Shinigami,Yhwach is from the Quincy and the mc can be from Hueco Mundo that why I love it and the mc can develop a little confidence like Aizen Instead of being silly all the time .can't wait to read more chapters
Attractive setting as the MC is the little brother of Captain America, seems an antihero, looking forward for how the plot going, the system called "Conqueror Store" seems also revealing its ambition
it's kind of good if you read it from chapter 1 to chapter 5
Spelling and word usage could be better but otherwise great book!
Angel
"Hmmm ...." Writerz looked annoying as always.
"Hi sweetie...What is your name?"