I’m sorry but for a novel called “I can Refine Everything” he is able to refine jack-fckn-sh!t
The story's a simple one. Maybe even predictable. But it doesn't need to be a literary masterpiece. The story's simple nature is what keeps me coming back for more. MC's modus operandi is that if he can brute force it, he won't need to scheme, so he gets stronger, until he is strong enough to literally crush any and all opposition he faces.
I can quite understand the books plot and it starts out nicely, i can see the vision author, Keep going at the same rate and your book will end up great. For now, I'm adding to collection, lets see how far you go.
The story is very interesting though it started off a bit out of genre. Still after the character discovers the system which was created by a god residing in him, he is going to level up and dominate in his school. Even in National Service Academy, he will surpass everyone. But he would still hide his powers to avoid becoming a lab rat to the world governments. His relationship with the god ( Son_Daemon ) also gets better along the way. Also the MC's powers are unlocked by activating a single cell from the god. Which means for every cell he activates he gets a new ability. I know, that's over powered
Shameless Author here with a 5 star review for my own work, haha?. If you have any questions, you can leave them down below or comment in the auxiliary volume. Without further ado, I'll also answer some FAQ•What do you mean R18?!— Yeah well, when I say r18, i don't mean it's full of debauchery or hentai, it's there as a cautionary tag. That said, there are a few questionable scenes here and there so discretion is advised (there aren't that much so don't worry)•What's up with your MC?! — I'm of the belief that villains aren't born, they are made. the mc starts out as a naive, happy go lucky protagonist (like Emma, Makoto Naegi, Izuku Midoriya, etc) but eventually gets that Obito treatment if you know what I mean ?. Volume 1 will mostly be dedicated to the darkness he saw and the hell he went through to reshape his ideals, break his spirit and proceed down a dark path, actual villainy starts from volume 2. That said, even as a villain, he'll still undergo different experience, phases and character development leading to the kind of villain he chooses to be. •Bro sure is popular, is this Harem?— I honestly don't know. maybe, maybe not. I'm still contemplating whether or not a harem is necessary. An overlord should have a harem, right? Well, we'll see how things go. Did I leave anything out? If so, be sure to comment down below and I'll be happy to address your concerns.
I am keeping this in check but is this harem?
Ok so I'm making this review of your novel all because I've been curious as to what it was like, first of all your grammar it's not bad but its also not great for example in some lines where you should be using past tense words you use their present tense, and the way your wrote his "system" was too long, and to be fair I was like that too when I first started writing you can correct that by breaking down his system instead of putting everything all at once, that's all tbh I made this cuz of your review on my novel a couple days ago and to be honest with you there's nothing wrong with my English and my novel isn't that bad, I just came back to writing after a whole year of taking a break so...
Finally decided to rate my book. If I don't cheer myself on, who will. Anyway, hope to create more exciting stories for you guys. This novel is a modern fantasy, I promise it's worth the read. Contains mature Scenes, read at your own risk ?
As of chapter 9: A very good story so far. Slow build up in the first couple of chapters but it really kicks into high gear after that initial development. Very good choice of descriptors and good character development make it clear how their personalities dictate their actions. I'm generally not a usual reader of romance, but I can't deny good writing when it's present. If any critique, I'd say there are some issues with switching between past and present tense, making it a bit jarring on first read, but it's not a major problem for those willing to overlook it. I look forward to future chapters!
Quite a good story, easy to follow and good grammer unlike a lot of other stories on this platform. Will love to read more from the author.
really enjoyed so far and anxiously awaiting new chapters please don't drop this
The novel is really cool and interesting. I recommend it. Cant wait for more chapters