from the start the mc starts acting like an idiot, stopping to think in battle about which cool lines to say, the system prompts are way to annoying repeating the same thing over and over, i quit there
i dont need to read. i just know this novel gonna be fantastic! sora writing style, idea, and storyline is A+. i know i didnt read it yet, but based on all of sora novel i have read, its never dissapointing, u guys can read under the veil of night, flower in the battlefield, villain lady, and more, all of it are superb! and these 3 novel is my favourite! give a try to read sora novel and u guys gonna fall in deep!
I give it a 4.8 why? This is the reason you, the author, should know.
The main character did not reach the level of IQ Light Yagami.
Therefore, the evaluation of the novel did not get a full score.
Just kidding ? But I am serious when I said that the novel will get the full degree if you take the mystery and excitement from the anime Death Note.
the character design is nice, it's to my liking [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
altogether I love this story
but I'll like it if it was harem???
Great start. Great development. please Continue.
It's really sad that all but the first dozen or so chapters are hidden behind a paywall. This series really is a hidden gem. I've read all the current chapters and can't get enough.The story is very slow but well-written, with lots of lore, world-building, and character development. I really like Wu Meiying right now. She's my favorite. She's so kind but also devious and seems to be much more than she appears. I have an idea of what she is, but I'm waiting until I read more to see if my theory is actually true.
me gusta mucho, por favor sigue actualizando.............................................................................................
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The novel is far too captivating. I liked how you described each scene and began imagining it without even realizing it. The use of words was enthralling. All I have to say is that it is a work of art.A nice work author
Book seems decent but the horrible grammar and repeating things and calling each other it all the time is horrible
I don't need to read the book to know it's going to be a banger. The Author never lets us down............................................................................................................................
Will read after you reach 40 chapter !. .