Supreme Harem God System

"Aright, now continue licking your sister's little sister until I tell you to stop, kay?" -chapter 38
-Not a fan of Yuri-s*x even though the mc is present. So this novel is a big no to me.

I just noticed that my review i did 2 months ago was cen sored by webnovel so i post it again. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Dropped for now (ch 680). I'm honestly not liking the current story, really lame writing and boring. Then there's the Author suddenly changing the MC's cultivation technique. This resulted in MC's cultivation to regress and halted the story, which was in the middle of transitioning to the new continent. Should've given this technique on the first mission rewards, not at this point of the story.

Reading Status: C21

Writing Quality 5/5
Stability of Updates 5/5
Story Development 4/5
Character Design 4/5
World Background 3/5

The total score: 4.2

The writing quality is pretty good, so even with an instant google translation, I can understand everything perfectly, although a little more detail would be appreciated sometimes, you know. It is worth mentioning that sometimes more dialogue makes the interaction more organic, but it depends on the context, where sometimes the descriptions can say much more than a character's point of view. The important thing is to virtually understand the sensations described (as a reader), which makes everything better to enjoy.

The upload stability is consistent, I can not say more.

I can infer the development of the story, but I still look forward to seeing how it will be dealt with Kingdombuilding, one of my favorite tags. Which relates to the world background, well, while it's understandable that the central point of the story is the concept of the MC's system, the world that the MC will experience is still green.

The character design is what catches my attention, and I can say that the author is consistent with this. I can understand that at some point there are always generic characters, and not all of them can be reflected by words like "alive" or at least dynamic, but from what I can see, I won't be disappointed. The "important" characters in the story will not be empty per se.

The concept of the story is what fundamentally attracted me to read. The synopsis reflects well what you will find if you read this, so I won't beat around the bush. If the potential I see is used in the right way, this can be very good. #NoNTR

Otherwise, good job.

I give it a 4.8 why? This is the reason you, the author, should know.
The main character did not reach the level of IQ Light Yagami.
Therefore, the evaluation of the novel did not get a full score.
Just kidding ? But I am serious when I said that the novel will get the full degree if you take the mystery and excitement from the anime Death Note.

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