Normally don’t do these, but this is a good one. I’m liking the story so far I saw there was no review so I thought I’d give you one. Keep up the good work.
After 13 chapters, the characters begin behaving and speaking in extremely unexpected ways, talking about events that never happened while also forgetting events that did happen. I'm almost certain that the author has two different versions of the same novel, with critical differences in the events of the plot between the two, and has mistakenly mixed up chapters of the two together. The story was going well at first, although the chemistry between the two main characters was lacking. But I initially dismissed it as just awkward writing. But after reading the 14th and 15th chapter, nothing made sense anymore and the attraction between the two felt more forced than ever. On the bright side, the way the author narrates the environment, the mood, and the thoughts and feelings of the characters is extremely good. I just hope that whatever made the characters begin behaving oddly and speaking in very self-contradictory ways gets resolved. The fact that nearly everything that happened during the first chapters is contradicted in a single dialogue in the 14th chapter leads me to believe that a huge mixup must have happened. The inconsistency is hard to overlook. I truly was enjoying the story but it just took such a sudden nosedive that I can't justify continuing to read it. Good luck, author.
WHAT THE HECK?I started reading this book. (LOVING IT !?) I was reading along, finished the last i4lpublished chapter shortly after it was published, and waited anxiously for the next & waiting & waiting & waiting..........and after a month, still nothing. NOTHING BUGS ME MORE than a great story being left, just hanging like this. I can understand if it writers block or something, but instead of posting a story & write it as you go, why not just write a chunk of it in advance or the whole thing ? before posting? so that you don't leave fans waiting like this. If I don't see updates soon, I will remove from my library.I hope Author that you are able to start posting more chapters soon. Your a Great Writer and this story is really interesting with great characters with a great setting. please keep up the amazing writing.
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Great backstory let's see!!! The power system too unique I think..I have read my own shares of novels especially those of system genre so since the backdrop looks cool hope for more dramatic and character involved story instead of cliche arrogant mc slapping everyone flaunting his hierarchy...do a good job..good luck
Throughout the myriad and abundant novels I've read , this has made it into the top ten. A book among books.A story among stories. The human nature aspect in the novel reminds me of solo leveling.
Just started this story a few days ago and have to say, it's overall pretty good. Starting off with the merits would obviously include the fact the the MC is a villian so if you're looking for that, you'll get it here, the power system in the story has quite a bit of potential to be pretty interesting if the author goes more into it and the side characters at least by ch 31 so far seem to be interesting enough and they're not just useless backround characters. Though it does have it's demerits, one of which would include the story pace being a bit too fast at least earlier in the novel and due to that some of the formed character relationships in the story seem a bit abrupt and out of place for a bit. Also the fact the at least as far as i've read (chapter 31), the first few numbered chapters can nearly be skipped with the only real relavance they've had in the sotry being explaing the MC's personality a bit. Though overall it's a pretty good novel so far. But i'll have to keep reading to see if it gets any better in the future as it does a some potential.
Why have the system tags or Harem tags when there isn't the slightest hint of romance in 50 chapters. tbh the writing is good with minimal errors. the MC is 2 dimensional but exactly what you get from the synopsis, op with minimal work. just sucks having the expectations from the synopsis that he'll be brokering with Gods and balancing that with romance only to find it's a slow burn with those elements taking longer than he dragons did in game of thrones.
I usually don't review novels that I don't like and just ignore them, but since the synopsis is literally asking for 1 star reviews, here it is.
1st chapter was too great. it can make you emotional but i hope the author keeps updating daily
I love this already I have great expectations from Devin and Bellakeep up the good work
To be honest, I generally didn't have the urge to read this book. But the cover just caught my attention so I did try it. Once I read it, I want more even though the author is a little green in writing??. Good job author, do your best.♥️♥️