I like this novel, with slow Pace and the MC is not to oveepowered at the beginning, and he must scrap materials from zombies he kill to unlock the fitures of STEIN, hope the author can write this novel to the end :) happy reading ;)
for a 19 year old who transfer to another world the MC behaves like 10 year old who only knows the world is black and white even after he was told to keep his powers a secret on 2 different occasions.
Book is a little slow paved for me. You don't really get much world background and the Mc is just way to dumb. I understand he is from the country but if he got into a decent college which seems to be the case he shouldn't be this stupid and clueless.
Honestly the best VR novel I have read, and I have read a lot of these. Some key things I’d like to point at that are done well. -The MC uses the knowledge from his reincarnation logicallyOne of the big things that grates on me in other reincarnation novels is the MC not capitalizing on knowing the future markets to make money since it just isn’t logical. This novel on the other hand does a great job. Another great point is how power scaling is done in this novel. Typically novels in this genre will have the MC gaining insane advantages but still having trouble and barley scraping by against a bunch of players. Authors do things like stalling the characters growth or making endless enemies at slightly lower levels, however in this novel the MC faces logical challenges and setbacks. There are no cliche one dimensional characters that just serve to further the word count. The author does a great job making the challenges logical, higher level NPCs, people searching for his location, and a very intricate plot. Probably the best thing about this novel however is the lack of plot holes. I don’t know how the author does it but with a constantly entertaining plot and nothing contradicting 10/10. I will complain however :( the chapters are too short. I’m currently all caught up with privlage chapters at 221 but waiting a week for ~13 chapters and then finishing them in a bit over an hour makes me sad. If you read this review please add a few hundred more words per chapter :) :) :) or maybe even double the length lol :) :)
It's already obvious to anyone that this novel is going to be full of nationalism, I'm going to stop here so I don't waste my time..............
Pretty good for a trial read. MC is smartly using his cheat to get stronger without making it too obvious. His increase in strength will be noticed, but no one has caught onto his immortality. Only 15chapters so far, but this one will do well so long as they don’t introduce a bunch of messy harem relationships. Just increase your strength and beat the Villain behind the ghosts MC!!
? I like it it was fun to read I really enjoyed it ?f
Ok first off, I’m really enjoying this. I’ve always enjoyed stories centred around shops and their op managers. Now onto my only complaint. Are you ready? Ok. Why did you have to end it when I just here wanting more!
A very nice setting and story, why doesn’t this have more reviews? I’m loving this! Keep up the good work author and keep posting those chapters!
Writing Quality: Minor grammar mistakes here and there but nothing too major. The only new novel I've read with proper sentence structure in quite some time.Story Development: The pace is good, a little hard to keep track of the timeline tho. As the story goes further, the MC is slowly getting involve in bigger and bigger mess.Character Design: The main character doesn't just kill blindly. He only kills when he knows there's little to no repercussions and have ingenious ways to solve the issues caused by the killings.Updating Stability:I have not much to say since I just picked it up. Hope it stays consistent tho.World Background:So far, it's centered on MC's academy but not much has been told. It is slowly moving into the kingdom the academy is in.
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I think this novel was on gravity tales and had more than a hundred or two hundred chapters already. Anyway, this novel has all the cliches I find annoying in Chinese novels.The novel has a mc who becomes a *** crazed maniac in less than 100 chapters, he has Captain America level of powers in normal earth, kills people for whatever reason(Some delinquents were harassing a harem member. He wanted to teach them a lesson and ended up breaking someone's bone. He felt like it would cause trouble to him so he just killed them all instead. The guys didn't want to kill him or anything, they were just perverts verbally harassing a girl...)This story is pointlessly nationalistic(Author mentions China superiority in places nobody really cares) and author doesn't know about foreign countries that much, so every foreigner is a stereotype. All mexicans are drug gangs here, American girls are really "open