It's back?!!!!!!! Finally!!!! I've waited for so long... I almost gave up man... This was one of my favorite novels of all time.. High iq mc's have become a rarity.. Thank goodness it's back.
Well if you come this far atleast read 1 or 2 ch. ? . .. ... .. .. .. .. .. . .... .. .. . . . . .. . . . ..... .. ... . ..
Most of what I can say has been said by others already.Author and Qidian both have their problems.-------------need more words------------
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Good love the evil MC and story.Love the villian MC
This novel is a masterpiece and the author is exceptionally talented. I'm like super unqualified to review this piece of art but I'll give it a shot anyway.Writing Quality- If any reader, I repeat, any reader, has a complaint with the writing style, he/she is a dumbass. The book is thoroughly detailed, even pertaining to small things that other authors miss. Whether it be describing how the food tastes, or the armour Fenrir wears or what clothes the characters are wearing or describing the surroundings... you get it. The interactions flow out smooth too, I laughed and smiled so much whenever Jason teased his sibling or friends and I gushed like crazy whenever Alice did something... anything. She'll be breathing and I'll be like, "aww she's so cute." This is low-key a review about how cute Alice is and needs to be treasured, okay? Fight me hmph. There weren't much grammatical errors either, just some typos that grammarly failed to pick up (you rely too much on that, author.) The book will make you weep and smile... sometimes at the same time. I was literally in awe when I read about the symbolism with the sun or when the shapeshifter predicted Jason's curse. The book is extremely well written. Kudos to you author!Story Development- A lot happens in one day in this story. The pace is right, neither too fast nor too slow. And since the author has just finished 10% of his story, I'm eagerly waiting to see how this progresses in the future.SPOILERS AHEADCharacter Design- The male lead is the most infuriating character you'll ever come across. He's a jerk, d******d, a*** etc etc (you get the point). I felt like strangling him so many times. His relationships are a mess. He doesn't know what he wants, and even if he does, he messes it up. It's all complicated and he says he's trying again and again but he's not. The only relationship he puts effort in is with Alice (so that's a plus). He's a good dad and he genuinely makes efforts to be good. As a brother... eh, he's equally good and bad. Who sleeps with someone when his sister is right next to him? (That's just fucking messed up.) He's very overprotective of Alina but I have to admit, he genuinely cares about her (a plus again). The characters I have absolutely no complain about are Alina (SHE'S AN EFFING QUEEN), Alice (aww, an angel), Michelle (I think all the girls who read your book would aspire to be her, her strength is commendable and you can't help but admire her), Katherine (A QUEEN again but since she's gonna have her own book I don't know whether I'll still like her so let's wait), Junco (<3) . I used to like Ava but then... (I have no words.). Okay now Jason's harem: Elizabeth- Don't like her, she raped Jason (red flag); Melanie- I couldn't have been more vocal about how I feel about her, she's a psychopath, a stalker, oversteps her boundaries (I don't understand why Jason feels attracted towards her but then he's attracted towards anyone who has a vagina), she has a traumatic past so she's kind towards orphans but then she was busy masturbating instead of saving those kids (the one she deeply cares about); Katelyn- I don't really care much about her, we haven't had much of her, she betrayed Jason but she had her own reasons so I'm cool with her and lastly Emily- I really really liked her in the beginning. She refused to show how she felt about Jason, had her insecurities but one day at the shopping mall, she just snapped and kind of became desperate? So I have mixed feelings about her, as the story progressed I like her less than I used to. Moreover, she deserves better than Jason. Ken, Raphael, Watson, Asami, Mapel are cool too. The villains in the story are well crafted. It's undeniably clear that the author has spent a lot of time in writing this story :)Updating Stability- Updates are constant, author updates twice or thrice every week undoubtedly. World Background- It's expanded amazingly well. No complaints at all. This story is a hidden gem and deserves much more reads, like at least a million+. But sadly, Webnovel only gives exposure to contracted works. Anyway, the book is about to reach half a million views, so congrats author. WELL DESERVED. I just have one suggestion that in the beginning of your story (in the first auxiliary chapter), you should mention that the auxiliary chapters are side chapters and should be read after they finish volume 1 because I myself know two people who straight away read the side chapters and then thought that your book had a lot of smut. Lastly, for any readers reading this, READ THIS BOOK. You won't be disappointed. Also, I forgot to mention the synopsis is DAMN, especially the warning at the end, made me laugh xD
[WARNING: SPOILER ALERT]Right, for this review, let’s dive in: First of all, let me start by saying, this novel starts off on a comedic note, having Edward transmigrated into an ‘idiot’s’ body. The world background as well, stellar, if I do say so myself. The writing quality can be improved, although it’s readable and understandable, going famously with the novel itself. This novel’s a true page-turner, one that will leave you laughing and desperately wanting more!Add this novel to your library and give it a read, I promise you won’t regret it. ;)- mari <3
The MC is powerful so why is he not showing it off to his relatives even when is underestimated all the time .................................................
at i was exited about a nonhuman MC. I was expecting a python turning into dragon story, but its just a log about the MC killing and eating anything on sight, and its uncomfortable to be honest, 20 chapters in and he is already eating humans, yes HUMANS although he is a snake now how is this different than a cannibal freak , and ofcourse they were from USA at this point i was already pretty sick of reading it but i forced myself to read until ch 39 AND guess what he met his former subordinates who were in fact responsible for his murder, is it was a murder his brother planned all this MC dosen't know about the brother part, MC ofcourse eat them all saying they are exp, overall this story somehow disgusts me and makes me uncomfortable. hopefully its not selected and waste the precious spot of other better books on the shelf.
GUYS STOP READING THIS STUPID NOVEL... JIANG HE BECAME A MURDERER!!!!!!!!!!!... IM READING THE RAW AND IM AT THE LATEST CHAPTER... WHEN HE BECAME STRONG HE KILLED ALL THE DISCIPLES OF A SECT.. ALL OF THEM EVEN THE INNOCENT.. JUST BECAUSE SOMEONE AT THE SECT WANT TO KILL HIM.. ANOTHER ONE IS HE KILLED ALL OF THE FOX CLAN(SECT) CAUSE 1 OF ITS FOX IS ATTACKING THE CITY... HE KILL THEM ALL.. THEY ATTACK JIANG HE BECAUSE HIS NOT EXPLAINING ANYTHING.. HE JUST GO TO THE SECT PLACE AND DEMANDING TO TALK AND HIS TOTALLY BEING UNREASONABLE.... SO OF COURSE LIKE A NORMAL INTELLIGENT BEING YOU WILL GET ANGRY... THEN HE KILLED THEM ALL JUST BECAUSE OF THAT.. MOTHERFKER... AND ALSO WHEN THE ANCESTORS OF THOSE SECTS THAT HE DESTROYED COME TO EARTH HE KILLED THEM... THEY JUST WANT TO SEE THEIR DESCENDANTS... WTF.... AND NOW INTO THE LATEST CHAPTER WITH THE "WESTERN GOD" HE ALSO KILLED THEM ALL.. BECAUSE ONE OF THE ENVOY HUMILIATED ONE OF HIS FRIEND.. THEY JUST WANT TO PREACH.. JIANG HE STOP THEIR MAGNIFICENT DESCENT SO OF COURSE THEY WILL GET ANGRY.. SO HE KILLED THEM ALL EVEN THO ZEUS ALREADY WANT TO JUST TALK IT OUT.. BUT NO.. HE DOESNT EVEN LET HIM FINISH HIS SENTENCE.... HIS A FUCKER...
No girlfriend all his life and now he can turn into a girl...
As of chapter 40, this novel can be summed up in one word 'confusing'. It's as if the author decides to write ten horror stories that's happening at the same time. Of course, it'll be confusing. But it might not be as bad if there're better introduction and descriptions of each of the horror stories. Instead, all of them just got randomly thrown out. I get it. It's supposed to be a confusing time in their world, but the readers shouldn't be as confused. Most often than not, readers get thrown into a different scenario shortly after starting the first one, with no transition. I was like 'what? what just happen?' all the time. The MC is also not the brightest cookie and a bit contradictory. He's trying to stay under the radar of the government since he got this human-skin book/scroll that can ****, but he goes to a buffet to eat for >5 hours straight each day without ever leaving to use the restroom while his stomach is still flat. How is that flying under the radar?Right now, there's no plot and no direction. I wouldn't mind the lack of them if the horror stories are more organized. I would have stayed just for those horror stories. Unfortunately, the way they're being written isn't enough to keep me here. Sad :(