Nice book, reminded me of some very good Xinxia that i have read before and This book has sme parts with good action and i think it would have a great manhua.
Trash.
This is my first time writing so please leave you feedback good or bad, it will be really helpful to me. Don't mind me giving myself 5 stars
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i do like stories like this but I'm having to read and try to figure out what things say. i suggest the author take their time and proofread more
it's not bad. could be better but not bad
Hi author here with a shameless review.I want to say several things, so let's go slowly.About the writing quality, I'm going to be honest here, it's not the best and isn't near since I'm not that good at English, but I'm trying, so bear with it until either I get better or I can pay a grammar checker.The story development, I'm trying to make it slow, not too much, but slow, so I don't know how that will end.The character design, it gets better (I think) around the chapter 11, so if you can pass the first ones, it will improve (a little, don't know in the future how it will be).The updating stability, I'm gonna be straight honest, it's awful. Since I'm a student with a quite strict school, I have lots of exams, so I have to study, and also this is a hobby, so I have other priorities. If you can understand that, I thank you, if you can't, I can't do nothing about it.And finally, the world background, there isn't too much right now, and probably it won't be too complex in the future, since I'm very clueless.If after all that negative things I said about my book (I now realize this doesn't help at all) you still want to read it and actually read it, I welcome you to this adventure that I don't know where will take us.(Pss, also join the discord, so we can chat and hear me ramble.)
These novels are the ones I crave the most!!
This novel starts a little shakey and the moral character of the MC seems questionable, but as it progresses those elements become less prominent. The novel is a pretty decent surface level look at a reborn MC exploiting his knowledge to become wealthy and powerful in Hollywood,. Its not super deep, but if you like American films and don't mind the occasional historical inaccuracy for the sake of the plot there's plenty to enjoy here.
So yes, here I am with my review of all the trial reads (will do one of this book too):Same Day......(SDOL): Didn't bother reading.I Can Transform Into A Zombie(ICTIAZ): According to the reviews, I deduced that the unwritten price for the transformation was the zombifying of MC's brain. Rotten.My Debauched Devotion(MDD): Read it till the 40 chapters. I honestly like it, but in the last 8 chapters or so it felt like it was starting to lose it's uniqueness. Could be a false warning.I'm Really Not Targeting The Mages: Even though I didn't finish reading the 40 chapters, I still got the idea of what it is. You can find a set logical rules in the novel. Rules that will not allow MC to fight higher level beings like cracking egg. It's not my fault if the author suddenly looses that logical screw in his head.Dafeng's Night Squad: By the end 40 chapters, even though Dafeng's Night Squad has only show it's face twice (2nd time it was just a passing glance), it's still one of the best in this trial read. Sometimes action done by the MC feels a little impulsive on minor matters, it is mostly how a normal person would have acted (and by my 'Normal' it certainly, absolutely does not include certain webnovel readers, I appreciate your cooperation). Overall this novel has more realism than most Magical Realism novel out there(a reference to Chinese and Japanese novels).I am Loaded With Passive Skills(IALWPS): help me find out whether it's Xin Fan's next novel after It’s Lonely to Be Invincible under a different name.Tanky Mage System(TMS): *sigh* Didn't read it yet. Couldn't find the motivation to start it. About the review, No comment. Could have been good, could have been bad or just not my cup of tea? Those who have, help me with this.The Treasure-Chest Hunting Vampire(TTCHV): Read the reviews then didn't trouble myself with clicking it's 'Read' button.My Special Ability is Perfect Replication(SAPR): I have experienced enough betrayals to help my mood return to the chaos of origin after looking at the name. Reviews didn't help in brightening my mood.The Era of Gods(TEOG): Not my cup of tea that's why was not able to finish the 40 chapters. But comparing it to other novels of similar plot and tags etc. I can at least say that it's decent enough that those who like this type of novel will read it. (Help me correct my mistake if I am wrong)Fantasy Simulator(FS): Similar to Dimensional Codex. And I liked both. The basic outline is that the MC has a system that let's him experience the life in another identity in another world. I am being very crude with that description but I have faith in my brothers that they will be able to provide a better outline.Starting with Contract Pets(SWCP): I believe there was novel in pervious trials with similar name and general plot line? A plus in my point is that the MC actively tries to learn knowledge and yes he cannot learn everything with a single look. I don't know why but it's just a plus in my opinion.God Rank Upgrade System: Didn't bother finishing the second chapter.I Just Won't Play By The Book(IJWPBTB): In the last month or two, this novel can become my best easily. Yeah, I know some of you think that this a beta novel etc. If I had read the reviews before reading the novel I might have taught the same. Let me clarify something, there is a reason for the MC's behavior and author used almost 10 chapters to clarify that (It's mostly the naïve days of MC at the starting shown as a back flash)Now, this begs the question:What I am doing?: Umm.......I don't know, you wouldn't happen to know, would you?Why am I doing?: Just felt like doing it.And why am I doing it here?: I guess because I liked it.And yes, do recommend some novel that won't make me loss my brain cells.
A brilliant and fascinating realistic fiction novel. The book is very captivating as it full of intrigues well planned out by the author. I am a fan of cultivation novels but I must say that when I found out about this book, I continued to read. It was smooth and entertaining as I was immersed in a world full of suspense. The book is amazing and there is no error which makes the book deeply interesting to read. So glad I got the link to this novel.Also, writer's english is awesome and excellent. Am a writer myself but I have to say that I would have to learn english from this writer. Smooth flows and good use of words. Good job author. I really appreciate your passion for this work. Don't stop writing and please give more updates. ? ? ♥