Loving how you write the stories gurl! With the flashbacks and all. You intrigue me on every chapter and I like reading about Dei's development. Great job!
Good or goof
Is it fine to skip this arc or it's connected to the others ??
Just to be brutally honest... it's an ok novel.
No wow factor, no new flavor, nothing. It's giving "generic". It depends whether you find "generic" a (+) or (-). In some ways it is somewhat predictable, from the plot to the characters (their personalities).
Characterization could use more work to make the characters feel more "real" (subjectively speaking). Perhaps I'm just tired with the tropes used in this novel given how common these elements are to the point that I must say it's overused. I can't tolerate some illogical aspects (narrative wise).
Author needs further development in the aspect of conceptualization, so as to avoid resorting to incorporating cliché. I need more layers to the plot, characters, and overall elements of the narrative. This may have potential, but serious work needs to be done.
To summarize, I find this novel no different than the tens of the same genre and plot... average. It's not bad but it is definitely lacking in some key aspects.
Just saying.
Ironically, they created a television series (Chum chun gei) based on this novel, but as it was adapted the idea from the beginning was "not to change anything in the story", so it was probably less disappointing than the novel.
warning:-
author of this story is that of rent a gf.
if you enjoyed rent a gf, this is for you.
mc is d*ickless like author.
tuesdays and fridays~ somedays tue,wed and fri, sat~
It looks interesting, I'll start with it
Hais..miss those days where the mc and his friends mess with each other planning to create an event everyday so that they can receive more gifts from the other sects.
Kenapa kamu marah
Right now i am at 877 chap and i can say the story is good so far
so thats why they do that. thanks that clears things up a bit