I actually forgot that I had read this novel and came to try it but gradually understood I had already read this 😆
sounnds like my typa novel
Huge focking spoiler, don't read this... I just have to talk about it. Omfg the betrayal of the fire and wind warriors made me cry, and yes it's totally a betrayal stupid author.
I’m on ch154, the ML is like a pedo!! In this world people live to 300, you’re not an adult until 30, the ML is 40 FL is 17! At first he was lamenting he has to wait for 13years, 2 weeks later he’s sneaking in her room, calling her a vixen while she’s sleeping and don’t he’s there!!! Give her a couple outfit to wear on their date?!?! While on the date trick her into kissing him???? She doesn’t say how old she was when she died, but still her body now is 17!!! i will continue reading to see how it goes, it was a good story but the last 4ch kind of shocked me with how shameless perverted the ml was suddenly
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While it’s a great parody,
But bad notes first, the novel gets more and more harem like, without having the tag, and I find myself losing interest as it does. I didn’t sign up for a harem. And the fact that he’s getting it one with his cousin not cousin…
I also had a problem with the sheer lack of important male characters. All the important ones are female. And any male characters are unexplored footnotes, easily replaceable.This highlights the harem feel.
As a side note, the MC should lose sometimes. It adds depth to the character.
On the good notes, the novel has great promise. It really gives you perspective on power-levels without having to state it. You just get a feel for how strong people are and the potential out there.
Also, the world building is great so far, and it has solid character design as I can see. I want to see more. I want to see outside of just the school. I also can’t wait to see more political aspects being explored. Like a game of thrones feel.
Currently, I think the novel has some good pacing.
Story has a lot of potential and as a fan I will urge you to update frequently. I really want to know what he’ll do with the Ultimate military system.
Giving myself five stars is shameless, but I think I deserve it.I've put a lot of thought into this novel, many future events are already planned with foreshadowing in the current chapters, so look out for them.In this review, I will highlight what you can expect from my novel, although I'm a newbie novelist, I can guarantee you that my novel has excellent writing, and character design.This novel's story is based on a mix of many genres and novels, novels such as Rebuild world, TOPAV, and small elements from Legendary mechanic, and genres such as Sci-Fi ; Fantasy.The world it self is a mix of futuristic and post apocalyptic, so a cyberpunk like world.I'll plan to update atleast once a day, everyday, for a while, only missing days when I'm too busy.As for the many of you who ask if there is going to be a harem or not, let me answer you now.Probably not, it depends on how the story would go tbh, since I'm not set yet on the female characters he will be meeting and how their stories would go.The romance will start later into the story and no it wont be the focus, not in the least, so for now atleast, harem haters don't worry too much, as there is one FL in mind.The story starts of slow, with big revelations about the world at the end of the first volume, I'm republishing my novel, so if you are a reader coming back from my old one, then hello, good to see you again, and for new readers, welcome and I hope you enjoy reading my story.
This story is really good man, keep it up.I will definitely follow each chapter of this incredible work.I'll be waiting for the next one, see you later.Bye.....
Top tier novel!Can't wait to read more of Michael's story. It's a really good and exciting start.Will keep coming back to give a more detailed review.
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Translation quality: 8/10 I had previously reed it on [MTL] however, now reading it by a human translator it's really a way more excellent. Moreover you have incredible translation ability, suggesting you to become a official [Translator] on webnovel. This will be considered as plagiarism even, mostly u will not receive a contract.